题目内容
【题目】假定你是李华,你的家人想邀请你校的英国交换生Peter到你家聚餐。请你给他写封邮件,内容包括:
1.表明意图;
2.阐述邀请的原因;
3.告知时间、地点和乘车方式。
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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【答案】Dear Peter,
How's everything going? On behalf of my family and myself, I'd like to invite you to have dinner with us.
I invite you not only because we are good friends and I want to treat you to dinner but also because my brother has some difficulty in learning English, which upsets him very much. Therefore, I hope that you can have a talk with him about English learning after dinner.
If it is convenient for you, please come to my home at 6 0'clock this Sunday afternoon. You can take the No. 666 bus at the west gate of our school and get off at Daxing Road, where I will pick you up.
I sincerely hope you can come. I'm looking forward to your early reply.
Yours.
Li Hua
【解析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生写一封邮件,邀请英国交换生Peter到家聚餐。
第一步:审题
体裁:应用文
时态:根据提示,时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时。
结构:三段式结构。
要求:1.表明意图,提出邀请。(invite to dinner)
2.阐述邀请的原因(as a friend; have a talk with brother with his English)
3.告知时间、地点和乘车方式。
第二步:列提纲 (重点词组)
on behalf of ; invite sb. to do; not only…but also; have some difficulty in…;be convenient for sb. ; look forward to
第三步:连词成句
1. On behalf of my family and myself, I'd like to invite you to have dinner with us.
2. I invite you not only because we are good friends and I want to treat you to dinner but also because my brother has some difficulty in learning English.
3. If it is convenient for you, please come to my home at 6 0'clock this Sunday afternoon.
4. I'm looking forward to your early reply.
根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步:连句成篇(衔接词)
1. 表并列补充关系:What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,
2.表因果关系:Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,
第五步:润色修改