Question

【题目】假设你是某外国语学校的学生会主席。最近，为了弘扬雷锋精神，你校决定开展多项志愿服务活动。请用英语写一篇倡议书，发表在校英语报上，号召同学们加入本校的志愿者俱乐部。内容包括：

1.陈述当志愿者的好处；

2.向同学们发出几点倡议。

注意：

1.词数120左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3.开头已给出，但不计入总词数。

Dear fellow students,

Volunteering has a positive effect on our community. ____________________________

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Students’ Union

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear fellow students,

Volunteering has a positive effect on our community. It can benefit us in several ways. First of all, volunteering can help us learn more about society and gain valuable experience. Secondly, by volunteering provides us with a good opportunity to put what we have learned to good use.

I hope more and more students will join the voluntary club of our school. Let’s express concern for the old and disabled people around us and offer a helping hand. Let’s clean the parks near our home. Let’s go to nursing homes to bring love to those in need.

Remember, we can make a difference to society if we are willing to lend a helping hand, so let’s take action.

Students’ Union

【解析】

试题分析：本次作文为任务型作文，要求写一篇倡议书。写作要点要求明确，1.陈述当志愿者的好处；2.向同学们发出几点倡议。故既要完成任务，又要兼顾形式的要求。

写作亮点：本篇要点全面，结构连贯。其句式上的变化既使得文章生动而流畅，也体现了作者驾驭句式的能力。例如：宾语从句what we have learned和 more and more students will join the voluntary club of our school；排比句Let’s express concern；Let’s clean；和Let’s go。连接词First of all, Secondly等。