Question

【题目】书面表达（满分20分）

假如你是李华，你的美国朋友Tom来信询问最近中国各地，尤其是北京，雾霾天气严重的情况。请你给Tom写封邮件。内容包括：

1. 对雾霾天气的情况描述

2. 雾霾对健康，生活及交通等的影响

3. 你的看法或建议

要求：100字左右（已给出部分不计入字数）

雾霾天气: the hazy weather

Dear Tom,

I’ve received your letter and thanks for your concern. __________________

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_____________________________________________________________

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Best wishes

Yours，

LiHua

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Tom,

I’ve received your letter and thanks for your concern.

Recently the hazy weather has hit many places in China, causing quantities of serious problems. For a start, the hazy weather is harmful to people’s health and daily life. Many people find it difficult to breathe so they have to wear masks. What’s worse, more traffic jams have happened and quite a few flights have to be put off.

The hazy weather in China has been caused by many factors. The severely polluted environment contributes a lot to this nightmare.

In my opinion, we should call on people to use more public transport, thus reducing the number of cars in the streets. Besides, we have to raise people’s awareness of environmental protection. Only if every single person makes contributions to protecting the environment, will we have a more cleaner and beautiful planet.

Best wishes

Yours，

LiHua

【解析】

具体到本次写作，本文的话题是如何防范雾霾及保护环境，文章的要点也基本上都给出来了，内容有：1. 对雾霾天气的情况描述；2. 雾霾对健康，生活及交通等的影响；3. 你的看法或建议。考生要按照要点适当增加细节，明确作文的基本内容后，就是选用准确的词汇和恰当的句子来表达。在写作的过程中，要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型，让文章更有文采。同时在列举措施的时候要使用合适的连接词，让文章看起来很有条理，也很流畅。

1. 最近雾霾天气袭击了中国很多地方，导致大量严重的问题。

①Recently the hazy weather has hit many places in China, causing quantities of serious problems.

.②Many places in China has been hit by the hazy weather recently, which led to quantities of serious problems.

2. 很多人发现很难呼吸以至于他们戴口罩。

①Many people find it difficult to breathe so they have to wear masks.

.②Many people have to wear masks because they find it difficult to breathe.