Question

【题目】书面表达

假如你叫李华，你的朋友Jenny来信向你询问如何保持健康。请你给他发一封e-mail提些建议。内容要点如下：

1. 注意合理饮食,多吃水果蔬菜；

2. 保证充足睡眠，至少8小时；

3. 坚持锻炼身体，多参加体育运动。

注意：

1.词数100左右；

2.可适当增添细节，以使行文连贯；

Dear Jenny,

Yours LiHua

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Jenny,

How nice to hear from you! In your letter you asked me how to keep healthy. I would like to give you some advice.

We know, food is of great important to us teenagers. Since we grow very fast , we are in need of nutritious food , such as fresh vegetables, fruits, fish, meat and so on. However, I think you’d better not eat food with much sugar and fat. And you should get plenty of sleep, which is necessary for you to have at least eight hours of sleep every day. In addition, you should take physical exercise regularly. It will be beneficial to your health. Only in this way can you keep fit.

Best wishes!

Yours, Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：假如你叫李华，你的朋友Jenny来信向你询问如何保持健康。请你给他发一封e-mail提些建议。内容要点如下：1. 注意合理饮食,多吃水果蔬菜；2. 保证充足睡眠，至少8小时；3. 坚持锻炼身体，多参加体育运动。写作时不要逐句翻译，可适当增加细节以使行文连贯同时要把所提示的点写全，语句通顺，同时要注意准确运用时态、语态、上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。根据句意适当使用并列连词，同时也要合理运用高级词汇和高级句子为文章增色添彩。注意：1.词数100左右；2.可适当增添细节，以使行文连贯。

【亮点说明】How nice to hear from you!感叹句位于句子开头；In your letter you asked me how to keep healthy.疑问词加动词不定式运用巧妙；Since we grow very fast , we are in need of nutritious food , such as fresh vegetables, fruits, fish, meat and so on. Since引导原因状语从句，在此表示一种客观事实；I think you’d better not eat food with much sugar and fat.宾语从句出现在句中；And you should get plenty of sleep, which is necessary for you to have at least eight hours of sleep every day.非限制性定语从句和动词不定式完美结合；Only in this way can you keep fit.部分倒装把文章推向了高潮；另外，However, In addition,的点缀，为文章增色添彩。