题目内容
【题目】阅读下面的短文,然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。
Dear editor,
I have been getting along well with my father. However, as I’m in Senior Three now, the question whether I should live at school or come back home for the nights has come to our family discussion. My father and I have different opinions over the matter and we are arguing over it these days.
My father insists that I should live at school. In the previous two years, I have been spending about 80 minutes every day to and from school. Living at school can help save a lot of time. In this way, I can have more time for my studies.
On the other hand, what I believe is that I should spend my nights at home. First of all, if I come home for the nights, I will have more freedom to arrange my studies. Meanwhile, I will have more time to communicate with my parents, which will make us understand each other better.
I don’t want to make compromises and neither does my father, as it seems. Could you tell me what I should do? I would be grateful if you could give me some advice.
Your sincere reader,
Teddy
【写作内容】
假设你是某英文报社的编辑,读了Teddy的来信后,想告诉他你的看法。以下是你回信的内容:
1. 以约30个词概括以上短文的内容。
2. 以约120个词表达你对住校这件事情的看法,内容包括:
1)建议Teddy听从父亲的劝告,并在原文的基础上补充理由;
2)作为编辑,以你曾经住校的经历支持你的观点;
3)给Teddy提一些建议。
【写作要求】
1. 可以使用亲身经历或虚构的故事,也可以参照阅读材料的内容,但不得直接引用原文中的句子;
2. 作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。
【评分标准】
概括准确,语言规范,内容合适,语篇连贯。
Dear Teddy,
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Yours,
Editor Li
读写任务 (共1小题,满分25分)
概要应包括:
1 My father and I hold different opinions on living at school or come back home for night.
2 My father insists that I live at school t save more time for study.
3 I would spend nights at home to arrange studies and communicate more with my parents.
注意人称的变化和书信的形式
【答案】
Dear Teddy,
From your letter, I know that you and your father are having an argument .He wants you to live at school to save more time for your studies .While you prefer to spend your nights at home ,arranging your studies and communicating more with your parents.
Both of you are quite reasonable, but personally, i think you should follow your father’s advice.For another ,without your parents’ help,you will have to deal with all kinds of problems all by yourself, which will make you more independent.
I once had a similar experience .I lived at school for three years in junior middle school and i felt it was beneficial to my study as well as my life.during night classes,everyone was quiet and focused.When i came across problems that i could not solve .I could go to the teachers for help in the office.then there was a 20-minute break when I could go out to enjoy some fresh air and chat with my friends.this drove away my tiredness and made me energetic again.
(as for your argument ,)It is my advice that you put aside your opinion and imagine living at school,which will help you make the right decision .I believe it will not only delight your father,but also bring benefits to you.
【解析】
试题分析:本文属于读写任务写作,动笔前,一定要认真阅读原文,并理解内容。认真看清题目要求,这篇书面表达给了一段材料:先要求以约30个词概括上文的主要内容,要求有很高的概括提炼的能力,要抓住文章的主题,再以约120个词写一篇短文,按照要点去表达,不能有遗漏,写作时注意准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系。写作时尽量使用自己会的单词、词组和句型,同时也要注意使用一些高级语法和句型,使自己的文章更有文采。
【亮点说明】范文概括精当,观点明确,不乏好的词组和句子,如:prefer to;communicate with,focus on,For one thing … for another …,as well as,be beneficial to;without your parents’ help, you’ll have to deal with all kinds of problems all by yourself, which will make you more independent.这句话用了非限定性定语从句,Then there was a 20-minute break when I could go out to enjoy some fresh air and chat with my friends.这句话用了定语从句。It is my advice that you put aside your opinion and imagine living at school, which will help you make the right decision.这句话用了名词性从句及定语从句。