题目内容
【题目】书面表达
请根据以下的说明内容,使用连贯的英语句子写一篇短文。
假如你是新华中学的高一学生李华,你的美国朋友Tom给你发电子邮件,询问你对高中生活的感受和你对新的一年的打算。请根据以下要点给他回封邮件。
【写作内容】
1. 对高中生活的感受;
2. 对新的一年的打算(如学习,交友,感恩父母等)。
【写作要求】
1.字数在100字左右。开头与结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Tom,
How is everything going on with you?
I am looking forward to hearing from you. Wish you happy!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Tom,
How is everything going on with you? It has been half a year since I became a senior one student. I feel it an honor to be a student here, because there are many excellent teachers and outstanding students. I’m also fond of the learning environment here, where we can compete and learn from each other.
What upsets me is that although I have tried my best to study hard, I still find it hard to catch up with my classmates. I’m especially poor in English, so in the coming new year, I’ll study harder. In addition, I’ll learn to share housework with my parents who give all their love and care to me.
I am looking forward to hearing from you. Wish you happy!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【解析】
试题分析:本文对考生的要求较高,要求考生首先读懂原文,再根据文字提示写作。写信的要点都隐含在信中,再读懂文章的基础上,要考生自己归纳出来,再一一进行解决,考生需要使用合适的连接词把这些要点连接成文,也要注意运用适当的高级句型如定语从句,强调句等让文章不显得那么平淡,而有文采
【亮点说明】范文中运用一些常见的短语be fond of 喜欢;catch up with赶上;In addition此外;share sth with sb 与某人分享某物;look forward to 盼望 ;I’m also fond of the learning environment here, where we can compete and learn from each other.这个句子运用where引导非限制性定语从句;What upsets me is that although I have tried my best to study hard这个句子运用到what引导的主语从句和that引导的表语从句;