Question

【题目】据报道，近日北京市空气质量达到重度污染程度，雾霾(haze)再次笼罩首都。雾霾天气极大地影响了人们的健康和生活。请仔细观察这两幅漫画，用英语写一篇短文，谈谈你对此问题的看法和建议。

你的作文应包括以下内容：

1．简要描述两幅图的内容；

2．概述雾霾对生活造成的影响；

3．简述你的建议和措施。

注意：1.词数150左右；

2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

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Answer 1

【答案】As can be seen in the first cartoon，many cars are running on the road，while the black smoke is rising from the factories.The second cartoon implies that due to the heavy air pollution，people’s life is negatively affected.

It is reported that Beijing was attacked by haze again recently，which has raised great concern throughout the country.Haze does great harm to our daily life.On the one hand，people’s health is greatly threatened.It is obvious that the number of people who have problems with their noses and lungs is growing.On the other hand，more traffic jams and accidents arise from the poor visibility on the road.

As far as I’m concerned，the recurrence of smog sounds the alarm about environmental protection.And it is not just the government’s affair.Everyone can be involved in a green lifestyle.For instance，we can choose the public transportation for work or school.And if possible，plant trees every year.

【解析】这是一篇提纲类作文，要求考生观察漫画写出对雾霾问题的看法和建议。文章内容要点已经给出。考生在写这篇文章时，要注意以下几点：

1.本题考察观察漫画写作，因此要注意提取准确、切题的信息。通篇以一般将来时与现在时态为主。

2.内容要齐全。本题要求包含两幅图的内容、雾霾对生活造成的影响、建议和措施，考生要注意切忌遗漏要点。写作时不要对要点进行简单的罗列，可以使用适当的连接词，使上下文行文流畅，衔接自然流程，语言要简洁。

3.作文根据提示内容可分为三段。第一段描述漫画的具体内容，语言要简洁精炼，涵盖重点，传达出作文的主题。第二段概述雾霾对生活造成的影响，可从人体健康、交通等方面阐述。第三段简述应对雾霾天气的建议和措施。

【范文亮点】

1.文章以“As can be seen in the first cartoon”开头，开门见山，直接描写漫画内容，引出本文的主题。

2.文章采用了 “due to由于”、“It is reported that据报道”、“do harm to对…造成伤害”、“On the one hand一方面”、“On the other hand另一方面”、“As far as I’m concerned就我而言”、“For instance例如”等高分词组。

3. It is reported that Beijing was attacked by haze again recently，which has raised great concern throughout the country. which引导的非限制性定语从句.