题目内容
【题目】
The Survey of Chinese Nationwide Bodybuilding Activities shows that there is an increase in the number of people who are participating in physical exercise.More than 40% of the Chinese people became frequent doers of body exercise in 2015,an increase of about 7% from 2008,according to the General Administration of Sport. Teenagers aged between 6 and 19 are the most enthusiastic participants of body exercise,compared to other age groups.Playground games are their No.1 choice,followed by others such as running,basketball and rope jumping.About 3 quarters of people aged over 20 take exercise during the evening hours.Jogging and running are the two most popular sports. |
写作内容
1.用约 30 个单词概述上述信息的主要内容;
2.用约120个单词谈谈你对此现象的看法,内容包括:
(1)简要分析越来越多的人喜欢锻炼的主要原因;
(2)根据你的分析,从社会和个人两方面谈谈你从这一现象中得到的启示(不少于两点)。
写作要求
1.写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句;
2.作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称;
3.不必写标题。
评分标准
内容完整,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当。
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【答案】Today,more and more people are playing an active role in various bodybuilding activities,and the young make up a large proportion.People of different ages choose different places for exercise.
There are some reasons contributing to this phenomenon.First of all,our government attaches great importance to bodybuilding activties and encourages people to get involved.It has launched many campaigns,aimed at promoting body building all over the country.So more and more people are willingly participating in taking exercise.In addition,the value in it is more widely recognized.
This phenomenon sets me thinking deeply.At the social level,with more and more people doing exercise,public health can be greatly improved,which will surely benefit the whole country.On a personal level,a healthy body is a powerful guarantee to improve the quality of life.Exercise can surely help you look good,feel good and keep fit.
【解析】试题分析:根据文章内容,用约 30 个单词概述文章信息的主要内容,并用约120个单词谈谈你对“越来越多的人喜欢锻炼”这一现象的看法。根据所列出的要点,并以此为基础充分发挥自己的想象力,灵活运用英语知识,采用不同的表达方式将各要点完整地表述出来。写作时注意时态、语态的合理运用,主次分明,详略得当,语言力求准确、简洁。根据情景的发展,按顺序安排好材料。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词,适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
【亮点说明】
本文是提纲式作文,采用三段式,内容符合要求,语句精炼,结构布局合理,使用高级句子。It has launched many campaigns,aimed at promoting body building all over the country.过去分词做伴随状语;the value in it is more widely recognized.副词的比较级和被动语态完美结合;with more and more people doing exercise,with的独立主格结构;public health can be greatly improved,which will surely benefit the whole country.which引导非限制性定语从句;Exercise can surely help you look good,feel good and keep fit.并列谓语恰到好处;另外,First of all,In addition,等的运用为文章增色添彩。