假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文.请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误.每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加.删除或修改．增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧).并在其下面写出该加的词．删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉．修改:在错的词下划一横线.并在该词下面写出修改后的词．注意:1．每处错误及其修改均� 题目和参考答案——青夏教育精英家教网—

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9．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
Every one of us can make a great effort to cut off the use of energies in our country．To begin with，all of us can start reducing to the use of oil by driving only when we have a real need．That won't be easy，I know，but we have to start anywhere．What's more，we can go to work by bike once and twice a week，and we can also buy small cars that burn less oil．Other way is to watch our everyday use of water and electric at home．For example，how many times have you walked out of a room and leave the lights or television when no one else was there？

分析本文主要讲述我们应当节约能源的使用．比如，只在需要使用车时才使用，购买省油的更小的车，不使用灯或电视时将它们关上等．

解答 Every one of us can make a great effort to cut off the use of energies in our country．To begin with，all of us can start reducing to the use of oil by driving only when we have a real need．That won't be easy，I know，but we have to start anywhere．What's more，we can go to work by bike once and twice a week，and we can also buy small cars that burn less oil．Other way is to watch our everyday use of water and electric at home．For example，how many times have you walked out of a room and leave the lights or television∧when no one else was there？
详解：
1．off改为down 考查词语用法．cut off意为"切断"，cut down意为"削减；删减"，此处应是：削减；删减．
2．energies改为energy 考查词语用法．energy的基本意思是"活力""干劲""能力"，多用作不可数名词，在指人的"精力"时多用复数形式．引申可表示"能""能量""能源"．
3．去掉to 考查词语用法．reduce是及物动词，后接宾语时不需要介词．
4．anywhere 改为somewhere 考查词语用法．anywhere用于否定句或疑问句，somewhere用于肯定句，此处是肯定句，用somewhere．
5．and改为or 考查连词．once or twice a week意为"一周一、二次"，表示选择关系用连词or．
6．small改为smaller 考查形容词比较级．根据后接的定语从句"that burn less oil"，应是"买更小的车"，用形容词比较级smaller．
7．Other改为Another 考查形容词．other为形容词，后面加复数名词，another表示"另一个"，way是单数，用another．
8．electric改为electricity 考查名词．and是并列连词，它前后连接两个相同的语法成分，water和electricity都是名词作介词of的宾语．
9．leave改为left 考查动词时态．and是并列连词，它前后连接两个相同的语法成分，walk和leave是并列谓语，都用过去分词构成现在完成时态．
10．加on 考查副词．leave the lights or television on意为"让灯或电视机开着"，加副词on．

点评高考短文改错题的形式有说明文，短文故事，书信等，具有很强的实用性．短文的内容和语言都符合高中学生的实际，从表面上看类似一篇学生习作．首先，通读全文，了解短文大意，把握全篇的时态、人称及行文逻辑，在通读全文时把一些容易的错误先改好，再进行逐句改错．其次，要进行逐个句子的改错．这是要对文中的词法、句法和语篇着重分析和特别注意．最后把改好的短文再阅读一遍，检查答案是否正确，感觉是否还有不妥之处，最终形成定稿．