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11．本市的美国留学生Tom在网上发帖，想结识一位中国朋友帮助他学习汉语和了解中国文化．假如你是光明中学的李华，得知消息后你愿意帮助Tom，并想约他见面，送给他一本好书．请你给Tom发一封电子邮件，其要点包括：1．表达你的意愿和打算；
2．简单介绍书的内容（关于中国的传统节日、习俗和饮食等）；
3．约定见面的时间和地点．
注意：1．词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3．开头和结尾已经写好．
Dear Tom，
I'm Li Hua from Guangming High school．
I learnedfrom the internet that you wish to improve your Chinese andknow more about Chinese culture．（高分句型一）I'd like very much to beyour friend and help you．
Here I have a good book for you．It's about Chinesetraditional festivals，customs and foods and so on．Thebook is a window through which you can get to know Chinese culture，so I think you will like it．（高分句型二）
Now I hope to see you and give you the book．If it isconvenient to you，shall we meet at 5：30 tomorrow afternoon at our school gate？If not，let's try to find anothertime or place that is suitable for both of us．（高分句型三）
Looking forward to your early reply．
Best wishes．
Yours，
Li Hua

分析 本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文，根据提示信息本市的美国留学生Tom在网上发帖，想结识一位中国朋友帮助他学习汉语和了解中国文化．假如你是光明中学的李华，得知消息后你愿意帮助Tom，并想约他见面，送给他一本好书．请你给Tom发一封电子邮件．写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确几个要点：表达你的意愿和打算；简单介绍书的内容（关于中国的传统节日、习俗和饮食等）；约定见面的时间和地点．2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象．要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写．本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写．3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态．4．注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：be convenient to对…方便的话；Chinese traditional festivals中国传统文化；and so on等等；If not如果不
I learned from the internet that you wish to improve your Chinese and know more about Chinese culture．（高分句型一）
The book is a window through which you can get to know Chinese culture，so I think you will like it．（高分句型二）
If not，let's try to find another time or place that is suitable for both of us．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Tom，
       I'm Li Hua from Guangming High school．I learned from the internet that you wish to improve your Chinese and know more about Chinese culture．（高分句型一）I'd like very much to be your friend and help you．
      Here I have a good book for you．It's about Chinese traditional festivals，customs and foods and so on．The book is a window through which you can get to know Chinese culture，so I think you will like it．（高分句型二）
      Now I hope to see you and give you the book．If it is convenient to you，shall we meet at 5：30 tomorrow afternoon at our school gate？If not，let's try to find another time or place that is suitable for both of us．（高分句型三）
      Looking forward to your early reply．
      Best wishes．
                                                                                                                                                                                                       Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                       Li Hua

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．

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B．ridiculous．
C．boring．
D．puzzling．
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A．He was unfamiliar with American history．
B．He followed the advice and flipped a coin．
C．He forgot his teacher's instruction．
D．He was new at the school．
11．The underlined word"burning"in Para.3probably meansD．
A．annoyed       
B．ashamed           
C．ready             
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A．by redoing his task
B．through his own efforts
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D．under the guidance of his headmaster．
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The baby squirrel was nursed back to health on a good diet，getting back his strength and quickly becoming a member of the family．
Mrs．Putterill added："When he was tiny he refused to sleep anywhere else but on the palm of my hand，but as he got older he started treating us like trees，hiding in our clothes．But one day he was playing with Abby and he managed to climb into her hair．He seemed to make himself at home and still does it now．We've never had a squirrel do this before and it's really quite funny to see but he's happy enough to lie there and watch the world go by．"
Bally Vaughan Wildlife Sanctuary was founded in the early l980s by Debbie's mother and father，fulfilling their dream of caring for sick and injured African wildlife．

2l．What is special about Abby Putterill？A
A．She has a squirrel living in her hair．
B．She likes squirrels very much．
C．Her pet is a homeless squirrel．
D．Her hair is always a bit dirty．
22．What is Hammy's relationship with the Putterills like？D
A．As he gets older，he wants to leave the Putterills．
B．He wants to go everywhere with Abby Putterill，even when she has a shower．
C．He is very comfortable with them，especially Mr．Putterill and Mrs．Putterill．
D．He has become their close friend，but he is closest to Abby Putterill．
23．At first，Hammy made a home for himselfB．
A．under the Putterills'clothes
B．on the palm of Mrs．Putterill's hand
C．on the floor of the Putterills'house
D．on the roof of Mr．and Mrs．Putterill's office
24．Where does this passage probably come from？A
A．A news report．
B．A travel magazine．
C．A science fiction novel．
D．An advertisement．

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