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11．假如你是李华，你的朋友smith发来邮件说他即将从澳大利亚悉尼探亲归来，询问是否需要从悉尼帮你买些东西，请给他回复一封电子邮件．要点如下：
1．向Smith的父母表示问候；
2．表达谢意；
3．希望购买的物品．
注意：1．词数100左右；
2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3．文中不得透露考生本人所在学校及真实个人信息．
Dear Smith，
Glad to know that you are coming back to China after a get-together with your parents in Sydney．（高分句型一）Here I'd like to send my best regards to your parents．I'm sure you must have had a good time with your family．I hope you can share your wonderful experience with us later．
It's considerate of you to do some overseas purchasing for me．（高分句型二）I'd appreciate it if you could buy me a travel booklet for Sydney．I believeI will have a better knowledge of your city after being exposed to the booklet．（高分句型三）I have also prepared a special gift for you．
Looking forward to seeing you soon．
Yours，
Li Hua．

分析 本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文，根据提示信息假如你是李华，你的朋友smith发来邮件说他即将从澳大利亚悉尼探亲归来，询问是否需要从悉尼帮你买些东西，请给他回复一封电子邮件，写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，要点包括：向Smith的父母表示问候；表达谢意；希望购买的物品．2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象．要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写．本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写．3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态．4．注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：send my best regards to向…致以良好的祝愿；have  a good time 过得愉快；being exposed to 暴露于；Look forward to盼望；
Glad to know that you are coming back to China after a get-together with your parents in Sydney．（高分句型一）
It's considerate of you to do some overseas purchasing for me．（高分句型二）
I believe I will have a better knowledge of your city after being exposed to the booklet．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Smith，
        Glad to know that you are coming back to China after a get-together with your parents in Sydney．（高分句型一）Here I'd like to send my best regards to your parents．I'm sure you must have had a good time with your family．I hope you can share your wonderful experience with us later．
        It's considerate of you to do some overseas purchasing for me．（高分句型二）I'd appreciate it if you could buy me a travel booklet for Sydney．I believe I will have a better knowledge of your city after being exposed to the booklet．（高分句型三）I have also prepared a special gift for you．
        Looking forward to seeing you soon．
                                                                                                                                                                                                     Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                      Li Hua

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．

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