题目内容
1.假定你是李华.你的美国笔友Luke打算寒假到中国旅游,请你写一封电子邮件给他推荐一个旅游城市.你的邮件需要包括以下内容:1.简要介绍该城市(位置、气候等); 2.说明推荐理由; 3.表示祝愿.
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.邮件的开头和结尾已给出,但不计入总词数.
Dear Luke,
I'm glad to recommend a tourist city for you to spend your coming winter holiday.
Sincerely yours,
Li Hua.
分析 本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文,根据提示信息假定你是李华.你的美国笔友Luke打算寒假到中国旅游,请你写一封电子邮件给他推荐一个旅游城市.你的邮件需要包括以下内容,写作时注意以下几点:1、仔细阅读有关提示,弄清试题提供的所有信息,要点包括:简要介绍该城市(位置、气候等); 说明推荐理由; 表示祝愿.2、提纲是文章的总体框架,要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象.要依据提示情景或词语,按照一定逻辑关系来写.本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写.3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态.4.注意使用高级词汇和句式,以增加文章的亮点.
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑,层次分明,而且使用了多种表达:As far as I'm concerned以我的观点来看;To start with首先;Besides另外;act as 充当,担任; look forward to 盼望;
It lies in the north of China and is not too cold at this time of the year.You can find all kinds of delicious food in Beijing,of which the most famous is the roast Beijing duck.(高分句型一)
Besides,there are a great number of tourist attractions worth visiting,such as the Great Wall,the Summer Palace and the Forbidden City.(高分句型二)
I can act as your guide if you like,and I am ready to offer help whenever you need it.(高分句型三)
解答 Dear Luke,
I'm glad to recommend a tourist city for you to spend your coming winter holiday.As far as I'm concerned,Beijing is best choice for you.
To start with,Beijing,the capital of China,is a very attractive city with a long history.It lies in the north of China and is not too cold at this time of the year.You can find all kinds of delicious food in Beijing,of which the most famous is the roast Beijing duck.(高分句型一)I hope you will enjoy it.Besides,there are a great number of tourist attractions worth visiting,such as the Great Wall,the Summer Palace and the Forbidden City.(高分句型二)These scenic spots have attracted millions of tourists every year.I promise you will have a wonderfully time here in Beijing.
I can act as your guide if you like,and I am ready to offer help whenever you need it.(高分句型三)I'm looking forward to hearing from you as soon as possible.
Sincerely yours,
Li Hua.
点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题.它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力.在撰写时要注意主谓语一致,时态呼应,用词贴切等.要提高英语写作水平,需要两方面的训练:一是语言基础方面的训练,要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功,即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子;二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧.