题目内容
6.假定你是李华,你班即将举行英语晚会,你想邀请外教Jill Robbins参加.请给他写封邮件,内容包括:1.真诚邀请;
2.介绍内容;
3.赴约时间.
注意:
1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数.
Dear Miss Jill Robbins,
I'm writing to give you a sincere invitation.In order to improve our English and enjoy ourselves,we have decided to hold an English evening party.(高分句型一)I'm honoured to invite you to our party,where you will enjoy English songs and dances.(高分句型二)We will be very happy if you can come and join us in the singing and dancing.
The party is to start at 8 p.m.tomorrow in the conference hall.If it is convenient for you,I'll pick you upat 7:30 tomorrow evening at the school gate.(高分句型三)I am sure you will have a good time then!We hope for your coming whole-heartedly.
I'm looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua.
分析 本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文,根据提示信息假定你是李华,你班即将举行英语晚会,你想邀请外教Jill Robbins参加.请给他写封邮件,写作时注意以下几点:1、仔细阅读有关提示,弄清试题提供的所有信息,要点包括:真诚邀请;介绍内容;赴约时间.2、提纲是文章的总体框架,要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象.要依据提示情景或词语,按照一定逻辑关系来写.本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写.3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态.4.注意使用高级词汇和句式,以增加文章的亮点.
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑,层次分明,而且使用了多种表达:In order to 以便;pick you up去接你;have a good time过得愉快;whole-heartedly衷心地;
In order to improve our English and enjoy ourselves,we have decided to hold an English evening party.(高分句型一)
I'm honoured to invite you to our party,where you will enjoy English songs and dances.(高分句型二)
If it is convenient for you,I'll pick you up at 7:30 tomorrow evening at the school gate.(高分句型三)
解答 Dear Miss Jill Robbins,
I'm writing to give you a sincere invitation.In order to improve our English and enjoy ourselves,we have decided to hold an English evening party.(高分句型一)I'm honoured to invite you to our party,where you will enjoy English songs and dances.(高分句型二)We will be very happy if you can come and join us in the singing and dancing.
The party is to start at 8 p.m.tomorrow in the conference hall.If it is convenient for you,I'll pick you up at 7:30 tomorrow evening at the school gate.(高分句型三)I am sure you will have a good time then!We hope for your coming whole-heartedly.
I'm looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题.它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力.在撰写时要注意主谓语一致,时态呼应,用词贴切等.要提高英语写作水平,需要两方面的训练:一是语言基础方面的训练,要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功,即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子;二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧.
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