题目内容
【题目】假设你是红星中学高一学生李华。请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序,写一篇英文周记,记录上周六你在公园劝阻游人钓鱼的经历。
提示词:公园管理处 the Park Service
注意:
1. 词数100左右,文章的开头已经给出,不计入总词数。
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
It was a bright sunny day last Saturday. After getting up, I ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】It was a bright sunny day last Saturday. After getting up, I started to jog in the park near my home. I was so happy breathing the fresh air in the warm sunshine. When I came near the lake, I saw a kid fishing with his dad.
At first I didn’t notice the sign saying “No Fishing” because it’s too small to spot. But having known that fishing is forbidden here, I went up to stop them. They hadn’t seen the sign either until I showed them. The dad felt so sorry about what they had done and packed up all the gears immediately. Then we waved goodbye to each other.
When I was about to continue my jogging, a worry struck me. What if other people didn’t notice the small sign? I went to the Park Service to suggest making the sign larger and more obvious. The officer was so glad to take my advice and I felt very excited.
What a good Saturday!
【解析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文写作——图画作文,要求写一篇周记。
第1步:根据提示可知,本篇为一篇周记;假设你是Li Hua,上周六你在公园跑步的时候,发现在禁止钓鱼的地方还有人钓鱼,你上前阻止他们,并向公园管理处提出加大禁止钓鱼牌子的建议。
第2步:根据写作要求,确定关键词(组),如:No fishing(禁止钓鱼),sign(标志),…too small to spot(太小了看不见),not… until…(直到)等。
第3步:根据提示及关键词(组)连词成句,需注意这是一篇周记,讲述的是上周末的事情,因此时态用一般过去时。同时,这是一篇图片式作文,一定要按照图片顺序进行写作,切记不可调乱顺序。
第4步:连句成文,可使用连词对文章进行润色,注意不要全用简单句,适当使用复合句,如They felt sorry about what they had done.等,全篇书写要清晰、规范、不得有涂改、书写错误等。
本文内容完整,语言规范,要点顺序正确,词数适当。时态、句型使用正确,是一篇比较优秀的应试作文。
【题目】
The Survey of Chinese Nationwide Bodybuilding Activities shows that there is an increase in the number of people who are participating in physical exercise.More than 40% of the Chinese people became frequent doers of body exercise in 2015,an increase of about 7% from 2008,according to the General Administration of Sport. Teenagers aged between 6 and 19 are the most enthusiastic participants of body exercise,compared to other age groups.Playground games are their No.1 choice,followed by others such as running,basketball and rope jumping.About 3 quarters of people aged over 20 take exercise during the evening hours.Jogging and running are the two most popular sports. |
写作内容
1.用约 30 个单词概述上述信息的主要内容;
2.用约120个单词谈谈你对此现象的看法,内容包括:
(1)简要分析越来越多的人喜欢锻炼的主要原因;
(2)根据你的分析,从社会和个人两方面谈谈你从这一现象中得到的启示(不少于两点)。
写作要求
1.写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句;
2.作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称;
3.不必写标题。
评分标准
内容完整,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当。
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