题目内容
3.假设你是红星中学高二(1)班的学生李华,上周六在颐和园你做了一件好事.请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序,写一篇英文周记,途述事情发生的全过程.注意:
1.周记的开头已为你写好.
2.词数不少于60.
Last Saturday was sunny.I went to the Summer Palace to spend my weekend as usual.
分析 (高分句型一)I was enjoying my reading in a pavilion near a lake when suddenly I heard someone crying for help.
该句使用了when引导的时间状语从句,暗示了事情发生时我正在读书.
(高分句型二)Cold as the water was,I managed to reach him and held him back to the bank.
该句使用了as引导的让步状语从句,并且倒装,句式较为复杂.原句为as the water was cold,把cold提前起到去强调水很冷的作用;
好词好短语:as usual像往常一样;hear sb doing听到某人正在做;be shocked by被…震惊到
Without hesitation毫不犹豫;To my great relief让我感到欣慰的是.
重点提示:要求叙述上周六在颐和园你做了一件好事,所以句子的时态必须要用一般过去时.
解答 It was sunny last Saturday.I went to the Summer Palace to spend my weekend as usual.At about noon,(高分句型一)I was enjoying my reading in a pavilion near a lake when suddenly I heard someone crying for help.(图片一内容)I jumped up to see what was happening and was shocked by the scene.In the distance a little kid was struggling in the water,(图片二内容)while many people were standing by without doing anything.Believe it or not,I even heard some people say that it was none of their business and it was freezing cold after all.(图片三内容)Without hesitation,I pushed through the crowd as I took off my coat,and jumped into the water quickly.(高分句型二)Cold as the water was,I managed to reach him and held him back to the bank.To my great relief,the kid was saved in time.(图片四内容)
(我的感受)I was proud of what I had done.I hope everyone can give a hand when someone else is in need.
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