题目内容
【题目】结合你送出或收到礼物的经历,以“The Best Gift”为题,写一篇词数约100左右的文章。
The Best Gift
【答案】
Years ago, I received a gift from my friend on my birthday who is now living far away. It delighted me at the sight of it. It was a piece of paper cutting, a kind of Chinese traditional art. With the gift, he also sent a letter, in which he told me that he had made the paper cutting himself. It took him several weeks to learn to make it. That’s why I value it more than any other gifts I receive that day.
Now, it is still hanging on the wall of my bedroom. Whenever I look at it, I can’t helping thinking of my friend. However far away we are, we feel close to each other.
So I think a gift full of love and effort is a true and most valuable one.
【解析】
试题分析:本篇文章是一个开放式作文,写作时注意以下几点:1、仔细阅读有关提示,弄清试题提供的所有信息,明确有哪些要点。2、确定文章的总体框架,要在试题给出的立场的范围内进行分析、构思和想象。要依据提示情景或词语,按照一定逻辑关系来写。3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态;就本文而言应该用一般现在时态。 4.注意使用高级词汇和句式,以增加文章的亮点。
【亮点说明】本用了多样词组 3.文章行文结构严密,能够结合自己的看法,具有现实意义 4.逻辑鲜明,思路清晰。在考场文结构紧凑,层次分明,而且使用了多种句式和结构。1.本文文法简单流畅,不拖泥带说,句式多样。 2.使上可谓一篇高分佳作。