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8.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文.文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处;每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词.
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉.
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改的词.
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分.
Many young boys and girls had the habit of smoking,though they are middle school students.As known to all,smoking does harm for human beins.More and more people have realized that how serious this problem is.But they are never boring with it.Some people think smoking is a kind of fashion,and others think smoking can refresh himself.In fact,smoking causes many ilness.The most serious illness causing by smoking is lung cancer.Meanwhile,smoking is the waste of money.What's worse,careless smokers may cause danger fires.

分析 本文主要讲述许多中学生养成了抽烟的坏习惯.一些人认为抽烟是时尚,其他的人认为抽烟能使他们自己恢复精神.事实上,抽烟产生许多疾病,其中最严重是肺癌.而且,抽烟也浪费钱,还有,粗心的抽烟者可能产生危险的火灾.

解答 Many young boys and girls had the habit of smoking,though they are middle school students.As∧known to all,smoking does harm for human beins.More and more people have realized that how serious this problem is.But they are never boring with it.Some people think smoking is a kind of fashion,and others think smoking can refresh himself.In fact,smoking causes many ilness.The most serious illness causing by smoking is lung cancer.Meanwhile,smoking is the waste of money.What's worse,careless smokers may cause danger fires.
1.had改为have  考查动词时态.全文讲述的是一般事实,用一般现在时态.
2.加is 考查定语从句.as is known to all意为"众所周知",as是关系代词,指代下文的整个句子.
3.for改为to  考查介词.do harm to意为"对…有害",是固定搭配.
4.去掉that 考查连词.realize后接的宾语从句是感叹句,已有连接how,that是多余的,要去掉.
5.boring改为bored 考查过去分词.be bored with意为"厌烦做…",是固定搭配,
6.himself改为themselves  考查代词.根据句意:其他的人认为抽烟能使他们自己恢复精神.用反身代词themselves.
7.illness改为illnesses 考查名词复数.illness是可数名词,其前有many修饰时要用复数形式.
8.causing改为caused 考查过去分词.illness与cause之间是动宾关系,用过去分词短语caused by smoking作后置定语.
9.the改为a 考查冠词.a waste of意为"浪费,白费",是固定搭配.
10.danger改为dangerous 考查形容词.fires是名词,其前用形容词修饰作定语.

点评 高考短文改错题的形式有说明文,短文故事,书信等,具有很强的实用性.短文的内容和语言都符合高中学生的实际,从表面上看类似一篇学生习作.首先,通读全文,了解短文大意,把握全篇的时态、人称及行文逻辑,在通读全文时把一些容易的错误先改好,再进行逐句改错.其次,要进行逐个句子的改错.这是要对文中的词法、句法和语篇着重分析和特别注意.最后把改好的短文再阅读一遍,检查答案是否正确,感觉是否还有不妥之处,最终形成定稿.

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