题目内容
【题目】书面表达
如今越来越多的家长花巨资送孩子出国学习,某英文报社就这一问题做了调查,并开辟专栏讨论。请你根据所给提示,以“On Teenagers Studying Abroad”为题用英语写一篇短文。
1、38%的人赞成这种做法:①孩子可以接受良好的教育:学好外语将来发展的机会更多
②开阔眼界,学会独立生活
2、62%的人不赞成这种做法:①花钱太多
②孩子太小无法照顾自己:安全问题令人担忧
3、你的看法(赞成与否)并给出至少一条理由
注意:1、文章的开头已给出,不计入总词数;可根据内容适当发挥;
2、字数120左右
On Teenagers Studying Abroad
Nowadays more and more people are sending their children abroad for further study.
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【答案】
On Teenagers Studying Abroad
Nowadays more and more people are sending their children abroad for further study. 38%of the people agree to this. They think their children can receive better education and learn a foreign language as well. And they can have more golden opportunities to develop themselves. What’s the most important thing is that they can also learn to depend on themselves and broaden their horizons, impr oving their understanding of the world.
However, 62% of the people are not in favor of it. The reasons are as follows. First of all, they think studying abroad costs too much money. Besides, children are too young to take care of themselves well. Many parents are worried about the safety of their children.
In my opinion, I agree with the second view. Although studying abroad is a good choice, students can also receive good education in our country, as long as our government take some measures to set up various schools and colleges to meet the needs of people
【解析】
试题分析:这是一篇话题类作文,短文标题与开头已经给出,我们所要做的就是根据题目内容写一篇英文短文。首先要说明很多家长都送孩子出国学习这样一种现象,把题干中的汉语翻译成英语,然后发表个人感想。需要注意不要偏离文章中心,写作时注意准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系,一定要契合文章内容。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有文采。
【亮点说明】范文中运用一些常见的短语have the opportunity to do 有机会做某事;depend on 依靠;in favor of赞成;take care of照顾;set up建立;What’s the most important thing is that they can also learn to depend on themselves and broaden their horizons, impr oving their understanding of the world.这个句子运用到what引导的主语从句和非谓语动词 ;