题目内容
【题目】书面表达
本学期,你校外籍教师拟开设如下课程: 1.英语口语;2.英语写作;3.今日美国。假如你是李华,请给课程负责人Mr.Smith写一份申请书,报名参加其中一门课程的学习,内容必须包括:
1.介绍你的英语能力;2.说明你感兴趣的课程及参加意图;3.表达你希望获准的愿望。
注意: 1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Mr. Smith,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
One possible version:
Dear Mr. Smith,
I’m Li Hua, who has learnt that the foreign teachers tend to open several English courses.
First and foremost, I have learnt English for so many years that I can do well in the exams, but I am weak in speaking English, which makes me less confident. In addition, I want to share my opinions with my foreign friends fluently in the football club. That’s the reason why I have great interest in Oral English Course. Last but not the least, it is my faithful hope that I can be allowed to take part in this course, so that I can make progress in my speaking English.
I am looking forward to your earliest reply.
Yours
Li Hua
【解析】
试题分析:本篇书面表达属于提纲作文,内容是写一封信给外教表示要选课。写作时注意以下几点:1、仔细阅读有关提示,弄清试题提供的所有信息,明确要点就是主要内容。2、提纲是文章的总体框架,要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象。要依据提示情景或词语,按照一定逻辑关系来写。本文写作时可以按照提示的3个方面的内容(1. 介绍英语学习经历和英语能力;2. 感兴趣的课程及参加意图;3. 希望获准的愿望。)进行介绍。3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态;就本文而言应该用一般现在时为主,第一人称。
【亮点说明】本文用First and foremost, In addition和Last but not the least使文章层次分明,结构紧凑,语言连贯。同时使用了多种句式和结构。比如who和 which引导的定语从句和That’s the reason why…,还有so(…)that…,主语从句以及it is my faithful hope that I can be allowed to take part in this course, 短语tend to ,make progress等。