2.(2008·北京卷)书面表达

情景作文 (30分)

   假设你是红星中学高三一班的学生李华,为校刊英语园地写一篇题为“Our Spring Outing” 的英文稿件。 请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序,叙述上周你们班从准备春游到春游结束的完整过程。

   注意: 词数不少于60.

   提示词: 游乐园  amusement park

       垃圾箱  bin

(请务必将情景作文写在答题卡II第一页指定区域内)

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[参考范文]

Last Thursday, we had a class meeting to discuss where to go for our spring outing. We came up with several choices such as going boating, climbing a mountain, and going to an amusement park. Finally, we decided to go mountain climbing.    The next day, we set off early in the morning. While climbing the mountain, we enjoyed the warm sunshine and a beautiful view. However, when reached the top, we were shocked to see litter here and there, such as bottles and banana peels. Then we started to pick up the litter. Afterwards, we put the rubbish into the nearby recycling bin and non-recycling bin respectively.

   We were tired but happy.

[思路分析]

   本文为一篇记叙文,其主要考查学生综合运用语言的能力。本题相对比较容易,因为题目中提供了比较具体的情景,而且是学生常见的语言情景。但要注意表达要点要全面,写本文的要点基本包括以下几点:1. 讨论2. 爬山3. 捡拾别人(或收拾自己)的垃圾4. 投放垃圾

   还要注意表达内容要点时要使用丰富多样的表达方式。包括词汇多样、句法多样,段落结构多样。也要注意描述事实和议论的结合,不能只描述事实而忽视议论。以上是本题获得高分数的关键。  

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