摘要: 可适当加入细节.以使行文连贯. 参考词汇: 地铁----- subway train February 12th, 2008 [参考范文] February 12th, 2008 The day is my Dad’s birthday. This afternoon I went to the shopping center downtown, and bought a present for him. Then I took the subway train home. Sitting on the train, I thought my dad would be very happy when he saw the present. At the next station, an old lady with two heavy bags got on the train and stood in front of me. She looked tired. I hesitated for a moment, and then offered my seat to her. The old lady thanked me a lot and sat down. Seeing her smile, I felt happy. I will always be ready to help others in the future. [思路分析] 本文是一篇记叙文.写作要点:1. 本文的命题形式为汉语提示+三副图画.记叙+议论.体裁为日记. 时态以一般过去式为主.2.叙述事情发生的时间.地点3. 为爸爸买生日礼物4.买完生日礼物后坐 地铁回家5.见老奶奶提着重物.找不到座位6.为老奶奶让座7.看到老奶奶笑容.倍受鼓舞.决心 以后更多的帮助别人

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