摘要： 可适当增加细节.以使行文连贯. What can I do for our environment? Everyone can do something for our environment. [参考范文] What can I do for our environment? Everyone can do something for our environment. For me, I should try to save electricity in my daily life. For example, if I am the last person leave the classroom in the evening, I will always remember to turn off the lights. In order to protect our forests, I will use paper wisely. I should try to use both sides of paper whenever it is possible. I will not use things like paper cups and disposable chopsticks because they are made of wood. I believe that doing all these small things will improve our environment and help make our world a better place to live in. [思路分析] 本文是议论文.用第一人称.时态以一般现在时为主.内容要点:(1)第一图说明我们应节约用电.(2)尽量不用木质的用品以保护森林.(3)引出结论.保护环境让世界成为一个美好家园. 4.经典说明文类

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