Question

【题目】随着旅游业的快速发展，旅游变得越来越受欢迎。然而选择自由行还是随团游，不同的人有着不同的看法。请就这一话题写一篇100词的英语短文，阐述你的观点并给出理由。

内容要点： 1. 赞成随团游

2. 价格相较自由行要便宜；导游会安排一切，并介绍景点的相关知识；……

注意：1.词数100 左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文流畅。3.开头已给出，不计入字数。

With the rapid development of tourism, travelling is becoming more and more popular.

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Answer 1

【答案】With the rapid development of tourism, travelling is becoming more and more popular. However, people hold different ideas about travelling in a group or alone. As far as I am concerned , the best way to travel is travelling in a group led by a guide.

First, compared to travelling alone, it is often cheaper to travel in group, because a tour group can often get group price and the best deals for nearly everything. Second, if we travel in a group, the guide will arrange everything for us. There will be no need to worry about hotel or restaurant reservations. Most importantly, the tour guide is often an expert in the places we visit. They can inform us of the history of an attraction and interesting stories related to it. Last but not least, we can make more new friends. If someone gets ill, others go to his or her aid. Often, friendship made on tours last a lifetime.

All in all, our trip will be cheaper, more comfortable, more interesting and more rewarding if we travel in a group rather than by travelling alone.

【解析】

本文为议论文。议论文是一种剖析事物、论述事理、发表意见、提出主张的文体。作者通过摆事实、讲道理、辨是非，以确定其观点正确或错误，树立或否定某种主张。议论文的注意事项：1.论点要鲜明，不可含糊其辞；论据要充分，要能充分证明论点的命题性，论据过程要条理清晰；2.文章安排逻辑性要强，推理要严密；3.重在说明，以理服人。议论文主要使用现在时态。

本文主要针对旅游业的快速发展，旅游变得越来越受欢迎。然而是选择自由行还是随团游，针对此要发表不同的看法。并阐述自己的观点并给出理由。

本文论点要点鲜明，论据充分，条理清晰。语言逻辑性强，以理服人。文章中恰当地使用了高级词汇如ｗith the rapid development of tourism, as far as I am concerned , compared to, worry about.., be related to…, rather than…，Most importantly,。表示顺序的连词first….,second…., Last but not least,…. All in all,使文章的论证条理清晰。句式多变，长短句结合。使用了常用句式。如：it is +形容词+to do sth…，There will be no need to do sth…..等。尤其是非谓语的运用非常成，。如非谓语作主语，travelling is becoming more and more popular；和非谓语作表语the best way to travel is travelling in a group led by a guide.非谓语作状语compared to travelling alone, it is often cheaper to travel in group。同时还运用了一些复合句，如状语从句：if we travel in a group, the guide will arrange everything for us.等，使文章丰富多彩。整个文章的句式相对比较灵活，这是一篇不错的文章。