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Dear editor,
I consider me a faithful reader of Advanced magazine because I have read it for about ten years.Therefore, it is the first time that I have sent my feedback to you.
Having read the article about ambition, I started to reflect of my own life.Lost in which I am pursuing, I often forget the process I should have been enjoyed.Your article reminds me of the significant of gratitude, a good state of mind and seize the day.Fortunately, I realized I focused that much on achievements, the results might even backfire.
Thank you for the useful and practical tips offering at the end of the article.This experience will become an unique part of my life, eventually helping me through the unexpected but appealing life journey.
Best regards,
Claire
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