Question

【题目】假定你是李华，你校将举办以“追梦70年”为主题的庆祝建国70周年成就摄影展。你受学生会委托为校宣传栏“留学中心”写一则英文通知，向在校留学生征集部分摄影作品。内容包括：

1. 活动目的；

2. 作品内容和要求；

3. 作品提交时间和方式。

注意：1. 词数100左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

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Answer 1

【答案】 Notice

To celebrate the 70th anniversary of the founding of PRC and arouse students’ patriotism and foster national pride, an exhibition on China’s achievements, which is themed Chinese Dream Pursuing over the last 70 Years, will be held in our school. Anyone who is interested is welcome to contribute their works to it.

The exhibition welcomes submissions representing the great achievements China has made in the past 7 decades, including high-tech, great events, transportation, new vehicles of communication, great changes in people’s daily life and so forth. Every photo submitted should be accompanied with a brief introduction and what deserves attention is that photo edited with Photoshop or any other software will not be accepted. Besides, every participant is expected to turn in three photos at most to Xinhua@gmail.com. Please bear in mind that the deadline for entries is September 30th, 2019.

Such a great chance is it to show your talent for photography and gain an insight into the brilliant success of China that all photography lovers can not afford to miss it. Looking forward lo your active participation.

The students’ Union

September 28th, 2019

【解析】

本篇书面表达是应用文，要求写一则通知。

第1步：根据提示可知，本文要求写一则通知：假定你是李华，你校将举办以“追梦70年”为主题的庆祝建国70周年成就摄影展。你受学生会委托为校宣传栏“留学中心”写一则英文通知，向在校留学生征集部分摄影作品。内容包括：1. 活动目的；2. 作品内容和要求；

3. 作品提交时间和方式。时态应为一般现在时。

第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如；photographic exhibition（摄影展），anniversary（周年），celebrate（庆祝），founding（成立），Chinese Dream Pursuing over the last 70 Years（追梦70年）， patriotism（爱国精神），submission（提交）及achievement（成就）等。

第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持卷面的整洁美观。