题目内容
【题目】请以“We Are What We Eat”为题,用英语写一篇短文,内容包括以下信息:
1. 饮食习惯日益受到重视;
2.良好饮食习惯的好处(两点);
给我们提供保持健康所需的营养物; 帮助我们抵抗疾病。
3. 不良饮食习惯的坏处(一点); 导致一些严重的问题,如肥胖。
4. 你对均衡饮食的看法。
注意: 可适当增加内容,以使文章连贯;字数100 字左右。
参考词汇:饮食习惯: eating habits 为某人提供某物:provide sth. for sb.
营养物:nutrient (n.) 抵抗:prevent (v.) 均衡饮食: balanced diet
We Are What We Eat
【答案】
We Are What We Eat
Nowadays people are paying more and more attention to healthy eating habits. There are many good reasons for it. First, a good eating habit provides the nutrients that we need to keep healthy. Meanwhile, studies have shown that a healthy diet is important in the prevention of many diseases.
On the other hand , if we have a bad eating habit, like never having breakfast or eating too much sugar, it can lead to serious problems such as getting too fat .
In fact, everything we eat can be either beneficial or dangerous to our health. So let’s try to keep our diet balanced. After all, we are what we eat..
【解析】
试题分析:本篇属于议论文,要根据研究来写报告。写作时注意以下几点:1、仔细阅读题目,弄清试题提供的所有信息,明确有哪些要点。2、要包含题目有中给的原因、结果和建议,并且按照一定逻辑关系来写。3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态;就本文而言应该用一般现在时。 4.注意使用高级词汇和句式,以增加文章的亮点。5. 这个文章是讨论吃早餐的问题,要有说服力。
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑,层次分明,而且使用了多种句式和结构。首先,严格按照题目中所给的三个要点来写,第一段写了饮食习惯的重要性,第二段写了不良饮食习惯的坏处,最后一段写自己观点,结构清晰。还有一些短语的运用,比如Meanwhile,On the other hand,等插入语,使得文章语言流畅。另外,句式多样化,在if we have a bad eating habit, like never having breakfast or eating too much sugar, it can lead to serious problems such as getting too fat.条件状语从句;a good eating habit provides the nutrients that we need to keep healthy.是定语从句。此外,文章还使用了大量短语keep our diet balance, pay more and more attention to 等。