Question

请根据表格的内容提示，写一篇题为SAVE EARTH, SAVE US的公益广告解说词。

注意：1. 词数：120词左右；

2．内容要涵盖上面所列的几条；

3．不能逐词翻译。

With the development of modern society, pollution caused by human activities is becoming a more and more serious problem.

 

Answer 1

With the development of modern society, pollution caused by human activities is becoming a more and more serious problem.

Smoke from factories and gases from vehicles are the main reasons for air pollution. Rivers are polluted when people throw waste into them, or when factories pour waste water into them. Modern lifestyle and modern ways of production also cause noise pollution. As a result, many species are dying out. More and more people are suffering from health problems.

Enough attention should be paid to this problem and measures should be taken. Firstly, we should make laws to prevent factories from pouring waste water into rivers and sending smoke into the air without being dealt with. Secondly, we should raise people’s awareness of the serious problem and call on more people to protect the environment. Only by working together can we help the environment!

【解析】

试题分析：考查提纲类书面表达：这是一篇提纲类作文，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来. 动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。本作文中给出的要点比较具体,故需要准确表达.写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化。平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果。

【亮点说明】范文中出现一些比较常见的短语as a result 作为。。的结果；pay attention to 注意；deal with处理；raise one’s awareness of ，提高。。的意识；die out灭亡；Enough attention should be paid to this problem and measures should be taken.这个句子中体现被动语态与情态动词连用。Firstly, we should make laws to prevent factories from pouring waste water into rivers and sending smoke into the air without being dealt with.这个句子中and 连接pure与send并列；Only by working together can we help the environment这个句子体现的only加状语的倒数结构。

考点： 提纲类作文