Question

【题目】假定你是李华，正在负责策划“绿色校园”活动（Green Campus Campaign），请给你的英国笔友Henry写一封邮件，向他介绍此次活动的目的、内容，并征求他的建议。

注意：

1. 词数100左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

Dear Henry,

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Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Henry,

How are you doing? I’m writing to seek your help, because we are to start a Green Campus Campaign to arouse students’ awareness of environmental protection.

We plan to organize this campaign like this. First, a series of lectures will be given, introducing ways to build a low-carbon school life. This will be followed by a discussion about ways of saving water, paper, and electricity at school. But how can we put them into practice and make them our daily routine? I wonder if you could give me some practical advice as I know you’ve organized such activities.

Looking forward to your reply.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一封邮件给你的英国笔友Henry，向他介绍“绿色校园”活动的目的、内容，并征求他的建议。

第一步：审题

体裁：应用文

时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时

结构：总分法

总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。

要求：1. 介绍“绿色校园”活动的目的、内容；

2. 寻求建议。

第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）

seek sb.’s help；arouse awareness of；environmental protection；plan to do sth.；a series of；put …into practice；daily routine

第三步：连词成句

1. I’m writing to seek your help, because we are to start a Green Campus Campaign to arouse students’ awareness of environmental protection.

2. We plan to organize this campaign like this.

3. a series of lectures will be given,

4. But how can we put them into practice and make them our daily routine?

(根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。）

第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）

1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last, Last but not least

2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition, As well as, not only…but (also), including, also

3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although + clause (从句), In spite of + n/doing, On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…

4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result

5表换一种方式表达：In other words, that is to say,

6.表进行举例说明：For example; For instance; such as + n/doing

7.表陈述事实：In fact, frankly speaking

8.表选择：either…or…，or

连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。

第五步：润色修改