题目内容
【题目】假如你是李华,现在国际新型冠状病毒抗疫形式严峻,你得知你的外国朋友Tony所在的国家也受到了影响。请结合我们中国抗疫的一些经验,给你的朋友写一封邮件。内容包括:
1. 对他安危的关心。
2. 给他一些个人防护措施的建议。如:戴口罩,勤洗手消毒,常锻炼等。
3. 提出自己的祝愿。
注意:1. 词数100词左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,使行文连贯。
参考词汇:新冠病毒novel coronavirus 口罩face mask 消毒杀菌剂sanitizer
Dear Tony,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Tony,
How are you going? Learning from the news that the terrifying virus is affecting your country and people there, I’m extremely worried about you. Since we have just experienced the same terrible panic and tough fight against the virus, here I have some advice for you.
First of all, it is essential to keep staying at home, which is the most effective way to protect yourself from infection. Equally importantly, wearing face masks is a must when you have to be outside, for the sake of both your own self-protection and the safety of everyone else around you. Besides, remember to wash your hands timely whenever you get home from outside.
All in all, you can’t be more cautious, for our health and safety should be our top priority. With all the measures taken, we are confident of fighting the virus. Hope the situation gets better as soon as possible.
Yours
Li hua
【解析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。现在国际新型冠状病毒抗疫形式严峻,要求以李华的身份给外国朋友Tony写一封信表达关怀和提出建议。
第一步:审题
体裁:运用文。
时态:根据提示,时态应为现在时。
结构:总分法。
要求:
1.对他安危的关心。
2.给他一些个人防护措施的建议。如:戴口罩,勤洗手消毒,常锻炼等。
3.提出自己的祝愿。
第二步:列提纲(重点短语)
terrifying virus ; tough fight against; wearing face masks; top priority
第三步:连词成句
1.Learning from the news that the terrifying virus is affecting your country and people there, I’m extremely worried about you.
2.Since we have just experienced the same terrible panic and tough fight against the virus, here I have some advice for you.
3.Equally importantly, wearing face masks is a must when you have to be outside, for the sake of both your own self-protection and the safety of everyone else around you.
4.All in all, you can’t be more cautious, for our health and safety should be our top priority.
根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步:连句成篇
1.表示文章结构顺序:表达关心;提出建议;提出祝福。
2. 表示并列补充关系:Since; First of all; Equally importantly; Besides; All in all
第五步:润色修改