Question

假如你叫王华，你收到你的英国笔友Tom的一封信，请你根据内容给他回一封信。
Dear Wang Hua,
How are you going on recently? I’m glad to tell you that I have planned to go to Zunyi Teachers’ College to study Chinese soon．Could you please give me some advice on how to learn Chinese well?
Write back soon．
Tom
要点包括：（可适当发挥）
1．在课堂上要专心听讲，做好笔记。
2．在课外要大胆开口，尽量找机会与当地人交流，勤记常用词和习语，提高听力。
3．科学合理的安排好时间，多加练习。
Dear Tom,                                                                     
     I’m so happy to learn that                                                    
                                                                          _   
Yours,
Wang Hua

Answer 1

Dear Tom,
I’m so hapy to learn that you want to learn Chinese in Zunyi Teachers’ College here．There is no doubt that to learn Chinese well is by no means an easy thing, but I have some ideas that may help．
Firstly, it is important to listen to the teacher carefully in class and take notes so that you can go over your lessons later．Secondly, try to practise speaking Chinese as much as possible out of class and write down whatever you hear to accunulate more commonly-used words and idioms．Don’t be afraid of making mistakes．And try to communicate with local people to develop your listening ability．Last but not least, you should organize your time and do lots of exercise．
I think the most important thing is that you should believe in yourself．I’m sure that you will suceed after your hard work．
Yours,
Wang Hua

解析试题分析：这是一篇提纲类作文。假如你叫王华，你收到你的英国笔友Tom的一封信，请你根据内容给他回一封信。要点包括：（可适当发挥）1．在课堂上要专心听讲，做好笔记。
2．在课外要大胆开口，尽量找机会与当地人交流，勤记常用词和习语，提高听力。3．科学合理的安排好时间，多加练习。需要写的内容已经粗略给出，需要我们翻译成完整通顺的句子，适当添加些内容，使文章更充实。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。一定要给出自己的看法。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型为文章润色。
【亮点说明】I’m so hapy to learn that you want to learn Chinese in Zunyi Teachers’ College here．这里含有一个宾语从句；I think the most important thing is that you should believe in yourself．这里含有一个宾语从句和一个表语从句。
考点：提纲类书面表达