Question

假如你是某中学学生李华。最近，你班同学正在参加21世纪英文报“大家谈”栏目的一个讨论。本次话题为：“父母有没有必要陪读？”
请你根据下表所列情况给报社写一封信，客观地介绍讨论的情况。

70%的同学认为：	30%的同学认为：
1.父母不应该陪读 2.父母陪读让我们养成依赖的习惯，不利于我们将来自控能力的培养，不利于我们培养良好的学习习惯。 3.父母陪读影响了他们的工作、学习和休息。	1.父母应该陪读 2.父母陪读能使我们腾出更多的时间专心学习，使我们身体更健康。 3.父母陪读能帮助我们确立学习目标，督促我们完成学习任务，鼓励我们独立解决困难，培养我们养成良好的学习习惯。

注意：1. 信的形式已经为你写好。
2．词数100左右。
3．参考词汇：陪读 accompany sb studying at school  督促 urge
I’m writing to tell you about the discussion we recently had about whether...

Answer 1

Dear editor，
I’m writing to tell you about the discussion we recently had about whether our parents should accompany us studying at school.
We do have different opinions on this matter. Most of us (about 70%)think our parents should not accompany us studying at school since it makes us fall into the habit of dependence, so that we won’t form the good habit of studying. What’s more, it is harmful for us to form the habit of controlling ourselves. At the same time it affects our parents’ work, studies and rest. 
While about 30%of my classmates think it necessary for our parents to accompany us studying at school. Accompanying us studying at school can let us have more time to spare for our studies. Besides, we shall be more healthy for their cooking. On the other hand our parents can help us set up our aim, urge us to finish our task, encourage us to overcome difficulties and get us into the good habit of studying..
Yours truly,
Li Hua

解析试题分析：这是一篇应用文写作，写一封信，介绍同学们关于父母有没有必要陪读这个话题的讨论情况。本题给出的材料比较全面，我们所要做的首先是应用正确的英语句子把这些内容表达出来，在此基础上亦可适当发挥，注意不要遗漏材料中给出的要点。写作前先结合要表达的事情确定句子的人称时态，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。注意写作中的时态、人称和数的问题，时态一般是一般现在时态，人称是第一人称较多。写作中语言要准确、简明，说明有条理，符合逻辑。
【亮点说明】范文结构清晰，语言流畅，多用词组和句型：At the same time 同时，fall into the habit of 形成…的习惯，Most of us (about 70%)think our parents should not accompany us studying at school since it makes us fall into the habit of dependence, so that we won’t form the good habit of studying. 这句话用了结果状语从句和it做形式主语， it is harmful for us to form the habit of controlling ourselves.这句话也是it做形式主语， While about 30%of my classmates think it necessary for our parents to accompany us studying at school. 这句话用了it做形式宾语，Accompanying us studying at school can let us have more time to spare for our studies. 这句话用了动名词做主语，. 还有范文还使用了What’s more, Besides, On the other hand这样的词使文章更加连贯。
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