Question

假如你是李华，你的美国朋友Eric在网上收看了今年的春节联欢晚会(Gala)，在给你的邮件中，Eric希望了解更多的“春晚”的情况。请根据以下要点，完成邮件回复。
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1、“春晚”从1983年开始举办，中国人视之为精神大餐（big feast），已发展成大多数中国人很难忽略的大事。
节目包括歌舞、相声（crosstalk）、小品（sketches）、杂技（acrobatics）……
3、你看过的最喜欢的某个“春晚”节目和原因。
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Answer 1

Dear Eric,
I’m glad to know you’ve watched the CCTV Spring Festival Gala this year and that you’ve got a very good impression of it.
The Spring Festival Gala, known as “Chun wan” to us Chinese, is a big feast for our eyes and ears. Ever since its first appearance in 1983, the Gala has developed into an event that most Chinese find it hard to ignore.
On New Year’s Eve every year, family members gather in front of the TV enjoying a wide variety of programs. Though they vary from year to year, the programs mostly include singing, dancing, crosstalk, sketches, acrobatics, etc, from which we have endless fun and entertainment.
Of all the programs, I especially like the magic shown by Liu Qian, a magician from Taiwan. I can tell why. Firstly, the show is pretty fantastic and amusing. Besides, we get a firm belief from his show that with magic, we all have the power to create magic in our lives. A nice idea, isn’t it?
Looking forward to hearing from you again.
Sincerely yours,
Li Hua

解析试题分析：题目要求给美国朋友Eric写一封回信，介绍春节联欢晚会的有关情况。使用第一人称进行写作，注意单复数、时态和语法知识的正确使用，不能出现拼写和标点错误。作文必须包含给出的所有要点，不能出现遗漏。
亮点说明：范文使用了较多的语法知识：宾语从句that you’ve got a very good impression of it；非谓语动词known as “Chun wan”，enjoying a wide variety of programs，shown by Liu Qian；非限制性定语从句from which we have endless fun and entertainment；同位语从句that with magic, we all have the power to create magic in our lives；it作形式宾语find it hard to ignore等，使作文句式多样，有层次感；
范文使用了很多短语：a big feast for；developed into；vary from...to...；Looking forward to；hearing from等，使作文充实，有说服力；
范文还注意使用Firstly；Besides来表示列举，使作文显得油条理性。
考点：书信类作文