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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处浯言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及—个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均限一词。
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
My neighbor Jackie is always consideration to others. One day , I was going to deliver a speech at an institute while I found my car wouldn’t get started. I rushed to the street to hire a taxi. Just at that time I come across Jackie. He was hurried going to attend his sick mother in hospital.
Furthermore, when he learned about my problems, he didn’t hesitate to give me a lift. I arrived at the lecture hall in time, when the audience had been present . I owe my great thanks to my neighbour Jackie , he is a person ready to help the others at any time.


【小题1】consideration改成considerate
【小题2】While改成when
【小题3】 come改成came
【小题4】hurried改成hurriedly
【小题5】attend后面加to
【小题6】Furthermore改成however
【小题7】problems改成problem
【小题8】when改成where
【小题9】he改成who
【小题10】去掉the

解析试题分析：文章介绍作者的邻居Jackie总是乐于助人，作者通过自己的亲身经历说明Jackie总是为别人着想，作者也很感激他。
【小题1】我的邻居Jackie总是对别人考虑周到的。Be considerate to sb“对…考虑周到”
【小题2】一天我要到一个机构做演讲，这时我发现我的车启动不了了。While表示时间是时间段，when表示时间点，这里是“这时”
【小题3】就在这时我遇到Jackie，这里描述的是过去的事情，用一般过去式： come改成came
【小题4】他匆忙去医院照顾妈妈。修饰go用副词hurriedly
【小题5】考查词组：attend to照顾
【小题6】然而当他听了我的问题，他毫不犹豫的让我搭便车。表示转折关系用however
【小题7】作者的问题就是汽车启动不了，用单数就可以。problems改成problem
【小题8】我及时赶到演讲大厅，那里观众已经在等着了。先行词是hall，定语从句缺少地点状语，用where引导定语从句。
【小题9】我要感谢我的邻居Jackie，他是个乐于助人的人。这是非限制性定语从句，用 who引导
【小题10】他任何时候都乐于帮助别人。这里的others是泛指，去掉the
考点：考查短文改错

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增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从11处起）不计分。
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下面文中共有10处语言错误，要求你在错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（/\），并在该句下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
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增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧ ），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线（__），并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
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增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分
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删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉；
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出改正后的词。
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增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词作斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
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增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在下面加上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
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