Question

下面短文中共有10处错误，错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分
Lin Qiaozhi, lived from 1901 to 1983, was a specialist in women’s diseases. She lived in a generation that girls’ education was second to boys’. It was hard work and determination which got her into medical school. What made her success later on was the kindness and consideration she showed to her patients. There is story after story of how she, tiring after a day’s work, went late at night to deliver a baby for a poor family who could not pay for her. She was said to have devoted her whole life to her patients and safe delivered about 50,000 babies. She also wrote a book intended for woman in the countryside, explaining how to cut the death rate from having or caring for babies.

Answer 1

【小题1】lived→living
【小题2】that→when
【小题3】which→that
【小题4】success→successful 或 succeed或∧a
【小题5】is→was
【小题6】tiring→tired
【小题7】去掉for
【小题8】safe→safely
【小题9】woman→women
【小题10】or→and

解析试题分析：林巧稚是研究妇女疾病的专家。她生活在一个女孩子的教育不受重视的时代。是她的努力和决心使她考入了医学院。而后来让她成功的是她对病人所表现出来的体贴周到和她的善良。她把自己的一生都奉献给了病人，她成功接生的婴儿多达50000多名。
【小题1】考查非谓语动词。Lin Qiaozhi, lived from 1901 to 1983, was a specialist s根据句子结构可知此处live是做状语，和句子主语Lin Qiaozhi构成主动关系，所以用现在分词。把lived改为Living
【小题2】考查定语从句。She lived in a generation that girls’ education was second to boys’Generation后的定语从句意思完整，不缺少成分，所以判断用关系副词，而generation表示时间，所以把that改为when。
【小题3】考查强调句型。It was hard work and determination which got her into medical school.根据句意可知此处是强调句型，强调句型构成“it was/is…..that ”，所以把which改为that。 
【小题4】考查短语。What made her success later on. 在“Make +宾语+宾补”结构中，补语应该是动词原形、形容词或者名词，而此处success指“成功的人或成功的事”，所以可以把success改为successful 或 succeed或前面加a。
【小题5】考查时态。There is story after story。整篇文章讲述过去的事情，要用过去时，所以把is 改为was。
【小题6】考查形容词。tiring after a day’s work。tiring“令人疲倦的”，tired“感到劳累的，厌倦的” 而 此处指的是尽管林巧稚身体疲劳，但仍去帮助别人，所以把tiring改为tired。
【小题7】考查介词。who could not pay for her。Pay for sth “付款 ”，而此处指支付某人费用，所以用pay sb，把for 去掉。
【小题8】考查副词用法。and safe delivered about 50,000 babies.修饰动词deliver应该用副词，所以把safe改为safely。
【小题9】考查名词。She also wrote a book intended for woman。此处泛指乡村的妇女们，要用复数名词,所以把woman改为women。
【小题10】考查连词。from having or caring for babies。根据文章内容可知此处是并列关系而不是选择关系，所以把or改为and。
考点：考查短文改错。