Question

下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从11处起）不计分。
Once, a man got on a bus to New York. Because he did not want to pay, so he hid in the toilet. But a passenger saw her. She tapped the person in front of her on the shoulder and say, “There’s a bum (流浪汉) in the toilet. Tell the bus driver.” The message was passing on from person to person. But somewhere along the way, it was changed. The bus driver told that there was a bomb in the toilet. He immediate stopped the bus and telephoned the police. Before the police came, they told the passengers to get into the bus and stay far away. Then they closed the highway, as a result of whom a 15-mile-long traffic jam was soon caused. With the help of the dog, the police searched for two hours. Of course they found no bomb.

Answer 1

【小题1】第一行so去掉
【小题2】第二行：her改成him;
【小题3】第二行：say改成said
【小题4】第三行:passing改成passed
【小题5】第四行：加was
【小题6】第五行：immediate改成immediately
【小题7】第六行：Before改成When/ After
【小题8】第六行into改成off
【小题9】第七行：whom 改成which
【小题10】第八行：the改成a

解析【小题1】第一行so去掉                   考查连词。在英语中有because没有so,有though没有but,所以去掉so.
【小题2】第二行：her改成him;              考查人称一致。句意：但是一个乘客看到了他。根据上文提到Because he did not want to pay, so he hid in the toilet所以是男性，故改成him.
【小题3】第二行：say改成said              考查动词时态。And连接tapped与say时态保持一致，所以用一般过去时。
【小题4】第三行:passing改成passed          考查动词的语态。句意：这个消息一个人一个人的传过去。消息与pass之间是被动关系，所以改成被动语态。
【小题5】第四行：加was                    考查动词的语态。句意：司机被告知流浪汉在厕所里。司机被告知这件事，所以用被动语态。
【小题6】第五行：immediate改成immediately   考查副词。句意：他立即停车给警察打电话。Immediately立即地修饰动词stop.
【小题7】第五行：Before改成When/ After     考查连词。句意：当警察来了之后，他们告诉乘客下车，离远点。根据下文they told the passagers,可见警察已经来了，所以改成When/ After。
【小题8】第六行into改成off                  考查动词短语。根据语境让乘客下车，所以get off the bus 下车。
【小题9】第七行：whom 改成which           考查定语从句引导词。句意：他们关闭高速公路，结果，造成交通阻塞。做为这件事的结果，which代指这件事。
【小题10】第八行：the改成a                考查冠词。句意：在一只狗的帮助下，他们找了两个小时。第一次提到所以用a.
考点：短文改错。