Question

【题目】作文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。 每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加: 在缺词处加一个漏字符号(夷)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除: 把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改: 在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意: 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Today I took part in an English singing competition in our school. Most of the singers and audience have been there when I arrived at the hall. See the large audience, I started to feel little nervous. After some times, it was your turn to sing. When the host read my name out, the audience burst into a great cheer, and my heart began to beat really fastly. The song I sing was Country Road, that is a very famous piece of American country music. I had practiced for it many times, and I didn’t think I had done a very good job. Anyway, I was still very excited because participating was the most important thing.

Answer 1

【答案】1. have → had

2. See → Seeing

3.在little前加a

4. times → time

5.your → my

6. fastly → fast

7. sing → sang

8.that → which

9. 去掉 for

10.and → but

【解析】

这是一篇记叙文。本文主要记叙了作者参加英语歌唱比赛的过程。

1.考查动词时态。时间状语从句when I arrived at the hall可知在我到达之前歌手和观众已经到达了，故主句谓语动词该用过去完成时，故将have 改为 had。

2.考查非谓语动词。主句的主语是I，故从句部分See与主语I是主谓关系，表示主动和进行，故用非谓语 都doing形式，故将See 改为 Seeing。

3. 考查冠词。表示“有一点”用a little，修饰形容词nervous，故little前加上a。

4. 考查名词单复数。此处表示“一些时间”，时间time是不可数名词，故将times 改为 time。

5.考查代词。表示轮到我唱歌了，此处“turn”是名词，意为“依次轮回”，故将your 改为 my。

6.考查形容词。用副词really修饰“fast”表示心脏真的跳的很快，故将fastly 改为 fast。

7.考查动词时态。我唱的歌，是一般过去时，sing的过去式是song，故将sing 改为 sang。

8.考查非限制性定语从句引导词。先行词是Country Road，后是一个非限制性定语从句，逗号隔开，应该由which引导，that不能引导非限制性定语从句，故将that 改为 which。

9.考查介词。practice是及物动词，后直接加宾语，不要介词，故将for去掉。

10.考查连词。根据didn’t think可知此句是转折关系，故将and 改为 but。