Question

【题目】假定你是李华，你的美国朋友Mike在中国做交流生，你校将举行中华文化节（Chinese Culture Festival），现请你给他写封邮件介绍此次活动，内容包括：

1. 目的（弘扬中国文化）；

2. 形式（古典文学赏析讲座、诗词朗诵比赛、书法展览等）；

3. 邀请参加。

注意：1. 词数100左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文流畅。

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Dear Mike,

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Yours faithfully

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Mike,

How is everything going? As I know, as an exchange student you are quite interested in the Chinese traditional culture, so I’m writing to tell you about the Chinese Culture Festival to be held in our school next week.

The activity is aimed at carrying forward the Chinese traditional culture and encouraging students to know more about it, in which reading poems, lectures about classical Chinese culture and an exhibition of paintings and calligraphy are included. I definitely believe you’ll like it.

I sincerely invite you to take part in it and I hope it will be beneficial to your learning here.

Looking forward to your early reply.

Yours faithfully,

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封信。

第1步：根据提示可知，本篇为一封书信；你的美国朋友Mike在中国做交流生，你校将举行中华文化节（Chinese Culture Festival），现请你给他写封邮件介绍此次活动的内容并邀请他参加，时态应为一般现在时为主。

第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如：中华文化节（Chinese Culture Festival），carry forward the Chinese traditional culture（弘扬中国文化），lectures about classical Chinese culture（古典文学赏析讲座），an exhibition of paintings and calligraphy（书法展览）等。

第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。

本文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，使用了较多高级词汇，如is aimed at；carry forward the Chinese traditional culture；定语从句的运用in which reading poems, lectures about classical Chinese culture and an exhibition of paintings and calligraphy are included.全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。