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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均限一词。
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I will spend the summer holiday in the country next year. Although the city is modern and convenience, there are still some problem, such as air pollution and noise. In the country, I can enjoy a comfortable and quiet life. There, the air was fresh and the water is clean. Trees are green and birds are sung. I can also go boating, fishing and swimming in the lake. What’s most, I can climb the hills. All this will be interested and good for your health. Above all, I can go back to the nature. But I want to go to the country a change. I’m looking forward to my summer holiday.


【小题1】convenience→convenient
【小题2】problem→problem
【小题3】was→is
【小题4】sung→singing
【小题5】most→more
【小题6】interested→interesting
【小题7】your→my
【小题8】去掉the
【小题9】But→So
【小题10】加上for

解析试题分析：这是作者以第一人称撰写的一篇渴望关于环保的小作文。
【小题1】Although the city is modern and convenience,这里需要convenient与modern一起作表语。
【小题2】there are still some problem，problem应用复数形式，因为系动词为are。
【小题3】the air was fresh and the water is clean.此文的时态为一般现在时，故此处的was应该为is。
【小题4】Trees are green and birds are sung.考查语态。birds是sing的动作执行者，故应用现在分词。
【小题5】What’s most作为插入语，“更重要的是”，most应该为more。
【小题6】All this will be interested and good for your health. interested应该为interesting，此处说的是“有趣的”。
【小题7】All this will be interested and good for your health.此文是作者用第一人称叙述的，故需用第一人称，your改为my
【小题8】I can go back to the nature. nature指“自然”，不与the连用，如：keep the balance of nature保持生态平衡。
【小题9】But I want to go to the country a change. But改为So，因上下文是因果关系。
【小题10】But I want to go to the country a change. a change前缺少介词，故加上for。for a change换个环境，换换口味。
考点：考查短文纠错

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增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改 10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分
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增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号∧，并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线＼划掉。
修改：在错词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2、只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
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增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）,并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
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删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
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注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有l0处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2．只允许修改l0处，多者(从第ll处起)不计分。
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