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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有l0处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2．只允许修改l0处，多者(从第ll处起)不计分。
Some students believe that whether they have much money or large possessions, they will be happy. They believe that they will be able to do anything they wanted to do if they have money. Some students think that they should be good health, and enjoy whatever they like. Many students wish to have much wealth from their parents. In this way, they don’t have to work hardly and they can own everything. I don’t quite agree on the above points. I don’t think money means happy. We cannot buy much things with money, such as health, happiness and knowledge. I value knowledge, it makes me happy, for I can do a lot of for mankind with knowledge. Although different people value happiness differently, me wealth of happiness is in my study.


【小题1】whether → if
【小题2】wanted → want
【小题3】be good health中good前加in
【小题4】hardly → hard
【小题5】on → to/with
【小题6】happy → happiness
【小题7】much → many
【小题8】it → which
【小题9】a lot of中of去掉
【小题10】me → my

解析试题分析：文章介绍不同的人对金钱的不同看法，很多人认为有了钱就可以幸福，但是作者认为真正的财富是学习，也只有学习能给他带来快乐，也能为别人做更多的事情。
【小题1】一些学生相信如果他们有很多钱和财产就能快乐。这是条件状语从句：whether → if
【小题2】如果有钱了，就可以做想做的事情，这是一般情况，用一般过去式：wanted → want
【小题3】一些学生认为他们应该有好健康。be in good health健康状况好
【小题4】这样他们不必努力工作。hardly 几乎不， hard副词“努力”
【小题5】我不同意上面的观点。同意…观点，agree to/with
【小题6】我认为钱不能意味着快乐。作主语用名词happiness
【小题7】有了钱我们有很多东西是买不到的。Much修饰不可数名词，many修饰可数名词
【小题8】我重视知识，它可以使我快乐，这是非限制性定语从句，用which引导
【小题9】我可以用我的知识为人们做很多。a lot of后面要接宾语，否则of去掉
【小题10】我的快乐的财富在学习中。用形容词性物主代词my 修饰study
考点：考查短文改错

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删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
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2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
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删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
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增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
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删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
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2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
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