题目内容
【题目】某校团委就学生的日常行为对全校1008名学生进行了一次问卷调查,结果如下图所示。假定你是团委成员李华,请根据图表内容向校英语报投稿,描述调查结果,简要分析学生行为习惯,并提出你的观点。
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注意:1.语言要连贯、准确,可适当发挥;
2.词数不少于120。
参考词汇:scratch paper 草稿纸
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【答案】The Youth League Committee of our school conducted a questionnaire survey on 1008 students. The results of the survey are as follows.
Nearly half of the students leave over food while having meals every day, while 39 percent of the students ignore reality and are particular about famous brands. Besides, about one third of the students go shopping without aim. On the other hand, only 12 percent of the students use scratch paper on both sides. What's more, those who turn off the light when leaving the classroom only account for no more than 10%.
From the chart above, we can safely draw a conclusion that our students don't have a healthy lifestyle. As students and the future of our country, we should raise our awareness of healthy lifestyle and protecting our environment. Only by saving our natural resources can we ensure sustainable develop.
【解析】
这是一篇图表类写作。
第1步:根据提示可知,某校团委就学生的日常行为对全校1008名学生进行了一次问卷调查,结果如下图所示。假定你是团委成员李华,请根据图表内容向校英语报投稿,描述调查结果,简要分析学生行为习惯,并提出你的观点。
第2步:根据写作要求,确定关键词(组):The Youth League Committee (共青团委员会);conducted a questionnaire (进行了一次问卷调查);leave over (剩下);scratch paper (草稿纸);without aim (无目的地)等。
第3步:根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般现在时。
第4步:连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。