Question

最近，不少城市发出了“减少白色污染”的倡议，得到广大市民的支持。请以“ People should not be encouraged to use plastic bags ”为话题在博客上发表简单评论。

注意：词数120左右。参考词汇：可分解的degradable 窒息choke

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

One possible version：

Plastic bags are very popular in our daily life. People go shopping with plastic bags in free markets, super markets, or departments.

But plastic bags are one of the major pollutants. We can see littered plastic bags thrown everywhere, especially along the railways or highways, in the parks or in the rivers. Because plastics is not degradable, once it is thrown in the environment, it will exist for a long time and pollute soil and water. They are even dangerous to wildlife as thousands of sea animals are killed each year when they eat or are choked by plastic bags. What’s more, “white pollution” creates a bad image for China.

So government should make a law to forbid the use of plastic bags in department stores and supermarkets. Meanwhile, people should be encouraged to replace them with paper bags or cloth bags.

【解析】

试题分析：本篇书面表达要求以“ People should not be encouraged to use plastic bags ”为话题在博客上对于最近很多城市发出的 “减少白色污染”的倡议进行简单的评论。文章只是给出了话题，没有列出要点，属于半开放性作文。但是污染是同学们耳熟能详的话题，内容接近生活，学生们都能做到有话可说。不过在写作时要注意篇章结构的安排要合理，应该首先提出问题，然后分析问题，最后解决问题，也就是提出解决的方法。对于这个话题同学们虽然会有很多话说，但是一定不要只是做到现象或者方法的简单罗列，而是应该使用恰当的连词，以使文章语言通顺，内容连贯。还要尽量多使用高级词汇和多种句式，此外还要注意文章应使用一般现在时。

【亮点说明】本篇范文采用经典的三段式围绕着“ People should not be encouraged to use plastic bags ”这一话题展开论述。首先作者提出了塑料袋在日常生活中普遍使用这一现象，然后用But plastic bags are one of the major pollutants.作为过渡句和主题句开始了对塑料袋对环境的危害进行介绍。最后得出结论So government should make a law to forbid the use of plastic bags in department stores and supermarkets.紧扣文章中心。在文中作者还使用了But，So等连词有效起到了过渡的作用，而且还使用了what’s more，meanwhile等词使文章内容衔接紧凑，语言通顺流畅。

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