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【题目】写作

假定你是李华，最近你在某家英文购物网站上购买了一本喜欢的书---《英国传统文化》（British Traditional Culture）. 收到之后发现一些问题。请你给该网站写一封投诉信，包括以下内容：

1.写信目的。

2.投诉内容：两周才到货（正常情况下一周即可）；书的封面稍有破损；书的内容中，关于餐桌礼仪部分，缺少页码P87—P94.

3. 希望换新书或全额退款(full refund)，建议对方重视售后服务。

注意：词数100左右；可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Sir or Madam,

My name is Li Hua.

Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Sir or Madam，

My name is Li Hua . I’m writing to complain about a copy of book named British Traditional Culture I purchased from your website. But there was a week delay in delivering the book，which had been expected to arrive last Friday.After unpacking , I was surprised to find the back cover broken. Actually what made me annoyed was that its content was not complete at all. The part about table manners from page 87 to 94 was missing.

For the above reasons, I strongly demand either a new one be posted to me immediately or I be given a full refund .By the way, you are expected to pay more attention to your post sale service.

Thanks for your consideration.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：假定你是李华，最近你在某家英文购物网站上购买了一本喜欢的书---《英国传统文化》（British Traditional Culture）. 收到之后发现一些问题。请你给该网站写一封投诉信，包括以下内容： 1.写信目的。

2.投诉内容：两周才到货（正常情况下一周即可）；书的封面稍有破损；书的内容中，关于餐桌礼仪部分，缺少页码P87—P94.3. 希望换新书或全额退款(full refund)，建议对方重视售后服务。注意：词数100左右；可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

【亮点说明】本文语言精练，结构严谨，文章布局合理，句中运用高级句子。I’m writing to complain about a copy of book named British Traditional Culture I purchased from your website. 过去分词和定语从句作后置定语；But there was a week delay in delivering the book，which had been expected to arrive last Friday.句中使用非限制性定语从句；Actually what made me annoyed was that its content was not complete at all.主语从句运用巧妙；I strongly demand either a new one be posted to me immediately or I be given a full refund .宾语从句中的虚拟语气完美使用；另外，But，After unpacking , Actually，For the above reasons, either ---or---的使用为文章增色添彩。