题目内容
【题目】书面表达
你校将于2016年9月12号举行隆重的建校110周年的校庆活动。届时将会有来自国内外的一些校友前来参加。假设你是学生会主席,现要代表学生会起草一份书面通知,就参加此次活动做简要阐述。
内容包括:
1. 欢迎大家参加此次活动;
2. 活动时间:9月12号9:00~17:00
活动内容和地点:文艺节目(学校体育馆)
演讲、教学研讨会(教学楼)
3. 活动期间应该注意的事项(至少两项)。
注意:
1. 词数100左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 文中不可透露个人姓名和学校名称。
参考词汇:校友alumni
Notice
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【答案】
Notice
There will be a grand event to celebrate the 110th anniversary of the founding of our school on September 12th, 2016 and some alumni from home and abroad are warmly welcome to our school to attend it. The celebration is planned to start at 9 am and end at 17 pm in the school gym. After enjoying the wonderful performances presented by teachers and students, you are invited to attend speeches or teaching seminars to be held in the teaching building.
First of all, be on time, please. Secondly, keep quiet and don't walk about during the celebration. However, taking photos and asking questions are allowed. Thirdly, whoever wants to make a speech about the subject should get well prepared ahead of time.
I believe you will have a wonderful time.
Students’ Union
【解析】
试题分析:本文是提纲类写作,要点已给出。写作时不要逐句翻译,可适当增加细节以使行文连贯,同时要把所提示的点写全,语句通顺,同时要注意准确运用时态、语态、上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系。根据句意适当使用并列连词,同时也要合理运用高级词汇和高级句子为文章增色添彩。
【亮点说明】要点齐全,结果严谨,采用三段式,句中使用高级句子。The celebration is planned to start at 9 am句中用被动语态;After enjoying the wonderful performances presented by teachers and students,you are invited to attend speeches or teaching seminars to be held in the teaching building.现在分词作时间状语,过去分词和动词不定式作后置定语;taking photos and asking questions are allowed.动名词短语作主语;whoever wants to make a speech about the subject should get well prepared ahead of time.主语从句作主语堪称经典;另外,First of all, However, Thirdly的运用为文章增色添彩。