假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文.请你修改你同桌的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误.每句中最多有两处．错误涉及一个单词的增加.删除或修改．增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧).并在其下面写出该加的词．删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉．修改:在错的词下划一横线.并在其下面写出修改后的词．注意:1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词,2� 题目和参考答案——青夏教育精英家教网—

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1．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在其下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
Time is such valuable for every one of us．Even it is more valuable than money．The reason is that when money is spent，we can earn back．However，when time was gone，it will never come back．So we must value our time．
From birth to death，time is limited for all of us．So we should make well use of it．As students，what we should do first is to study well and obtain knowledges so that we can serve our country in the future．
Therefore，some people don't know the value of time．They spend time do meaningless things，such as smoking，drinking and even gambling．
You should form a good habit of saving time．Don't put off that we should do till tomorrow．Laziness will bring us the poverty as well as failure．

分析本文作者主要通过讲述时间的重要性，旨在倡导我们应养成节约时间的良好习惯．在文中，作者认为时间要比金钱更珍贵：因为钱花了，还能再挣回来；时间过去了，将永远不再回来；每个人的时间都是有限的，作为学生应该珍惜时间好好学习，将来报效我们的祖国；人们不应该花费时间去做一些毫无意义的事情，应养成节约时间的习惯；今天的事情今天做，懒惰只会带来贫穷与失败．

解答答案：
Time is such valuable for every one of us．Even it is more valuable than money．
             so
The reason is that when money is spent，we can earn∧back．However，
                                                                              it
when time was gone，it will never come back．So we must value our time．
                 is
From birth to death，time is limited for all of us．So we should make well use of it．
                                                                                                        good
As students，what we should do first is to study well and obtain knowledges so that
                                                                                               knowledge
we can serve  our country in the future．
Therefore，some people don't know the value of time．They spend time do meaningless
However                                                                                            doing
things，such as smoking，drinking and even gambling．
You should form a good habit of saving time．Don't put off that we should do till tomorrow．
We                                                                                   what
Laziness will bring us the poverty as well as failure．
                           去掉us

1．such改为so    考查副词     such通常用来修饰名词，此处用来修饰形容词；故用so
2．earn后加it     考查代词      根据句意可知，此处缺少宾语 money；为了避免与前一句中的money重复，故用代词it
3．was改为is      考查时态    由于本文主要讲述了时间的重要性，说明的是一种实际情况；故用一般现在时is
4．well改为good   考查形容词     此处用来修饰名词use，故用形容词good
5．knowledges改为knowledge    考查名词      由于knowledge"知识"是不可数名词，所以它的后面不能加s；故用knowledge
6．Therefore改为However   考查副词   根据上文讲述了时间的重要性，下文讲到有人不知道时间的价值，浪费时间，可知这里承接的上下文之间应是转折关系，由于此处用来修饰一个句子；故改为副词However
7．do改为doing     考查固定结构     固定结构spend time doing sth．意为：花费时间干某事；故用doing
8．You改为We   考查人称代词     结合上下文可知，此处应是向读者发出倡议：我们应该养成节约时间的良好习惯；故改为We
9．that改为what   考查连接代词     此处用在动词短语put off 之后引导宾语从句，并且在从句中作宾语，意为：我们应该做的事情；由于that只起连接作用，不作任何成分，也没有词义；故用what
10．去掉us    考查代词   本句的意思是：懒惰将会带来贫穷和失败；故去掉us

点评短文改错是集语法知识与语言技能为一体的综合性试题，主要考查学生对词汇、语法和语篇三要素的把握能力．错误类型一般有：缺词、多词和错词．常见的错误有：1 词法错误，主要包括动词、名词、冠词、形容词、副词、代词和介词等词类误用、同义词混淆使用、固定搭配等方面．解答此类试题时，需要正确分析句子成分，熟练掌握各词类的用法以及掌握一些固定搭配等．2 常见句法错误．通常表现为简单句、复合句以及疑问句、祈使句、感叹句和强调句等错误．解答此类试题时，需要掌握各类句子的句式结构及意义用法．3 应在理解文章大意的前提下，进行作答．

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12．Claustrophobia
Claustrophobia，or fear of enclosed spaces，is one of the most common fears．Claustrophobia can be deep fear or even panic as a result of being in a small space．
Claustrophobia can develop after a troubling childhood experience （ such as being trapped in a small space during a childhood game），or from another unpleasant experience later on in life related to small spaces （ such as being stuck in a lift）．（71）DThis response then becomes programmed in the brain，making an association between being in a tight space and feeling anxious or out-of-control．As a result，the person often develops claustrophobia．
According to Mark Powers，Ph．D．，Associate Professor of Psychology at Southern Methodist University，"Claustrophobia is a specific fear and not a type of panic disorder．The primary specific danger forecasts for claustrophobia are that either the person will be trapped or run out of air．"
（72）GClaustrophobia symptoms can include：sweating，accelerated heartbeat，upset stomach，passing out，light-headedness，shaking，breathing problem，etc．
Some common situations can cause anxiety in claustrophobia sufferers．The claustrophobia sufferer will look for an exit when inside a room，avoid driving on the highway or major roads where there is heavy traffic when inside a car，avoid taking lifts when inside a building，or stand near a door when at a party．（73）E
Claustrophobia can have harmful social and psychological effects，since the patient will often avoid situations in which she thinks she will have an anxiety attack，leading to hiding and sadness．
（74）A According to Dr．Powers，"Exposure treatment，a form of mind-behavioral treatment，usually results in a total reduction in anxiety symptoms if conducted properly．"
Flooding is a type of exposure treatment in which the person is exposed to a situation until the anxiety attack passes； a less extreme form of exposure treatment is counter-conditioning．Counter conditioning includes behavior treatment，as the person is taught visualization and relaxation techniques before being slowly reintroduced to the cause situation．
（75）FMedications to help treat claustrophobia include things which help to ease the heart pounding often associated with anxiety attacks．

A．The good news is that claustrophobia is very treatable．
B．The past experience can trace back to the moment of birth．
C．According to some doctors，claustrophobia is worse than the fear of heights．
D．When a person experiences such an event，it can often cause a frightening panic attack．
E．In extreme cases，the very sight of a closed door can lead to feelings of anxiety in a person．
F．Treatment for claustrophobia can also include medication or a combination of several treatments．
G．When a person with claustrophobia finds herself in a restricted space，her body responds in certain ways．

9．Music for Humans and Humpback Whales
As researchers conclude in Science，the love of music is not only a universal feature of the human species，but is also deeply fixed in complex structures of the human brain，and is far more ancient than previously suspected．
In the articles that discuss the field of bio-musicology，the study of the biological basis for the creation and appreciation of music，researchers present various evidence to，show that music-making is at once an original human"business"，and an art form with skillful performers throughout the animal kingdom．
The new reports stress that humans hold no copyright on sound wisdom，and that a number of nonhuman animals produce what can rightly be called music，rather than random sound．Recent in-depth analyses of the songs sung by humpback whales show that，even when their organ would allow them to do otherwise，the animals converge on the same choices relating to sounds and beauty，and accept the same laws of song composition as those preferred by human musicians，and human ears，everywhere．
For example，male humpback whales，who spend six months of each year doing little else but singing，use rhythms （节奏） similar to those found in human music and musical phrases of similar length-a few seconds．Whales are able to make sounds over a range of at least seven octaves （八度音阶），yet they tend to move on through a song in beautiful musical intervals，rather than moving forwards madly．They mix the sounds like drums and pure tones in a ratio （比例） which agrees with that heard in much western music．They also use a favorite technique of human singers，the so-called A-B-A form，in which a theme is stated，then developed，and then returned to in slightly revised form．
Perhaps most impressive，humpback songs contain tunes that rhyme．"This suggests that whales use rhyme in the same way we do：as a technique in poem to help them remember complex material，"the researchers write．

63．The underlined words"converge on"in Paragraph 3probably meansA．
A．tend towards  B．refer to  C．turn into  D．put forward
64．Which of the following shows the advanced musical ability in humpback whales？B
A．They can remember complex material．
B．They can create pleasing patterns of music．
C．They can make sounds like drums continuously．
D．They can sing along with rhythms of western music．
65．What is the main idea of the article？D
A．Animals are able to compose and enjoy music like humans．
B．Human beings borrow ideas in music from humpback whales．
C．Humpback whales are skillful performers in the animal kingdom．
D．Music-making it an ancient activity of both humans and animals．
66．The main purpose of the passage is toB．
A．argue and discuss        B．inform and explain
C．compare and advertise    D．examine and assess．

16．Expand your knowledge of natural history!
The University of Michigan Exhibit Museum is located on central campus in the historic Alexander B．Ruthven Museums Building．With over 300displays on four floors，the museum offers unlimited opportunities for discovery．Exhibits，artifacts and habitat scenes help you expand your knowledge of prehistoric life，wildlife，geology，astronomy and more．
Hours and Admission Fees
The museum is open 9am to 5pm Tuesday through Saturday and 1pm to 5pm on Sunday．The museum is closed on Mondays and major holidays．There is no general admission fee for individuals．
Groups
All groups of more than 10must make reservations to visit the museum at least two weeks in advance，even if the group is only planning to browse in the museum on an"unguided visit"．Unguided visits can be arranged for any day the museum is open．Groups may schedule guided tours，multimedia shows，and planetarium shows for any day Tuesday through Friday．Call the reservation desk at 313-555-1234between 9am to 4pm to make group reservations．
Parking
Parking is available in many of the nearby public parking structures for a $5.00daily fee．Buses may park in the museum lot only on weekends．Parking is free in the museum lot．
Museum Shop
The Exhibit Museum Shop is located on the basement level of the museum．The shop carries items for children and adults，including rocks，minerals，fossils，books，a variety of dinosaur merchandise，T-shirts and posters．A subscription（订阅） to the quarterly Newsletter of the Exhibit Museum is also available there．
Planetarium Shows
The planetarium is located on the fourth floor of the Exhibit Museum．On weekends，regularly scheduled planetarium shows are open to the general public．Show topics change seasonally．Currently showing："The Brightest Stars"（no age limits） Sat．at 10：30and 11：30；"The New Solar System"（for age 8 & up） Sat．at 12：30and 3：30； Sun．at 2：30．Tickets are 2.5per person．Planetarium shows are free for members of the Exhibit Museum Club．

56．Who must call in advance before visiting the museum？A
A．Any group of more than ten people．
B．Only groups wanting guided tours．
C．Anyone wanting an"unguided visit"．
D．Anyone hoping to watch a planetarium show．
57．Visitors can make a subscription to the museum newsletterC．
A．at the reservation desk
B．in the museum lot
C．at the Museum Shop
D．on the fourth floor
58．When could you and your 7-year-old son see a planetarium show together？B
A．Only on Saturday afternoon．
B．Only on Saturday morning．
C．Tuesday through Friday．
D．Either Saturday or Sunday．

6．假如英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌的以下作文，文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加，删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
I just came back from Britain last week．I was luckily enough to be one of the students from different country to visit the UK from Feb.16to 28．We paid a visit to a good many of places，like London，Oxford or the Lake District．I learned much about British culture and history in London，where was my favorite．I also liked Oxford，in which I saw much more old buildings．The Lake District was beautiful，but it was pity that it rained heavily when they were there．The most excited thing for me in Britain was that I make a lot of friends there．

13．-This journey was fantastic and exciting，though I feel really tired．
-A warm bath together with a sound sleep，________ you will recover soon．（　　）

When Julio Diaz stepped off the subway platform after work one night, he was simply planning to walk over to his ______ local diner for a meal. But when a teenager boy ______ him with a knife, Diaz knew the evening was about to take a more ______ turn.

The young man ______ Diaz’s wallet, and Diaz passed it over without ______. But just as the robber turned to walk away, Diaz called after him: “Hey, wait a minute. You forgot something.”

The robber turned around, ______.

“If you’re going to be ______ people for the rest of the night, you might as well take my coat to keep you ______.”

The teenager looked at Diaz in ______, and asked why he would do such a thing. Diaz ______, “If you’re willing to risk your ______ for a few dollars, then I guess you must really need the money.” He told the young man that he’d just been heading out for dinner, and that he would be happy for some ______.

The young robber decided to take Diaz up on his ______, and they headed into Diaz’s favorite local haunt (常去的地方) together. As they were sitting at the table, the manager, the dishwashers, and the ______ all said hello to Diaz, and the young man was ______ at his popularity. “You’re even nice to the dishwashers!” he exclaimed.

“Haven’t you been taught that you should be nice to everybody?” Diaz asked him.

“Yes, but I didn’t think people actually ______ that way,” the teenager replied. Thanks to Diaz, he was beginning to see that ______ wasn’t such a strange phenomenon.

When the bill came, Diaz told the teenager that he’d have to pay for the meal. After all, he still had Diaz’s ______.

But the teenager slid the wallet back across the table without a moment’s thought, and Diaz ______ him to dinner. Diaz also gave the would-be robber a $20 bill to take with him—in ______ for the young man’s knife.

“I figure, you know, if you treat people right, you can only hope that they treat you right.” Diaz said.

1.A. popular B. favorite C. perfect D. wonderful

2.A. approved B. provided C. combined D. approached

3.A. dramatic B. smooth C. natural D. academic

4.A. picked B. demanded C. returned D. obtained

5.A. objection B. doubt C. exception D. invitation

6.A. excited B. relaxed C. surprised D. satisfied

7.A. greeting B. troubling C. robbing D. stealing

8.A. healthy B. warm C. glad D. rich

9.A. disbelief B. sorrow C. horror D. danger

10.A. reacted B. repeated C. recited D. replied

11.A. confidence B. peace C. freedom D. burden