Question

假定你是灵溪二高高一(6)班的学生李明。最近你收到了居住在新加坡的笔友Mike寄来的一封信。请你应他的要求，根据表格的内容写一封回信，谈谈学校的生活。

目前情况	在高一学习了一个半月，已经习惯了高中的学习和生活。
所学科目	中文、数学、英语、物理、化学、政治、历史、地理、体育。
学校生活	上课时间从早上7点25开始，下午5点结束。之后做运动或到学校图书馆阅读约半个小时，然后回家。十点半睡觉。
希 望	1. 秋天来了，温州的秋天很舒服，欢迎他来玩。 2. 请他下次来信时谈谈他在学校的生活。

 
Dear Mike,
I was very glad to receive your letter on Jun. 15th. At your request, I’ll tell something about my school life.
                                                        
                                                        
I’ll appreciate it if you can tell me something about your school life in your next letter. I’m looking forward to it.
With best regards.
Yours truly,
Li Ming　

Answer 1

One possible version:
Dear Mike,
I was very glad to receive your letter on Jun. 15th. At your request, I’ll tell something about my school life.
After studied in senior one for one and a half months, I am used to the study and life in senior middle school. I have nine subjects: Chinese, maths, English, physics, chemistry, politics, history, geography and P.E. School hours usually begin at 7:25 a.m. and end at 4:00 p.m. After class, we have sports, such as ball games and so on, or do some reading in the school library for about one hour. Then I go home. This is my school life.
Spring is coming . Wenzhou, a city near the sea, is very beautiful in spring. Welcome to Wenzhou, Mike.
I’ll appreciate it if you can tell me something about your school life in your next letter. I’m looking forward to it.
With best regards.
Yours truly,
Li Ming　

试题分析：考查提纲类短文写作，本文是关于高中学习情况的说明，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来.本作文中给出的要点比较具体,故需要准确表达.写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化，尤其是数字的不同表达法。
点评：本文的要点都已经给了出来，在写作是要注意选择高级的词汇和句型来表达，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果。