Question

有些同学在家中是父母的好孩子，可是在学校里显得“格格不入”。事实上，只要你能够尊师敬友，热心助人，态度端正，遵纪守规，认真学习，善于聆听，你也会成为老师和同学眼中的好学生。请你以“I will be a popular star in school life!”为题，结合生活实际，用英语写一篇120词左右的短文，谈谈自己的做法。短文中不能出现本人的相关信息。

Answer 1

不唯一
One possible version:
I will be a popular star in school life!
Most students want to be popular with others, but not everyone can achieve this goal. How to be a popular student? In fact, it is very simple.
At first, a good student not only respects teachers but also is friendly to classmates. It's also important to be good listeners. In this way, people would like to talk with us about their problems.A good student should follow the school’s rules. What's more, we should be helpful, and always try to help people who are in trouble. It's necessary to be active and warm-hearted. Of course, as a student, we should work hard and try to get good marks. There is no doubt that we should smile often.
I will take the principles above to realize my dream---to be a popular star in my school.

试题分析：这是一篇话题类作文，短文标题与写作要点已经给出，我们所要做的就是根据题目内容写一篇英文短文。由于题干给出的要点比较简洁，所以需要对要点进行扩展。题目中的要点都要提到，缺一不可。注意要结合生活实际，谈谈自己的做法，短文中不能出现本人的相关信息。另外，要注意不要偏离文章中心，写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思要连贯，符合逻辑关系。注意词数120词左右，不要写得太多，更不能太少。尽量避免使用生僻词汇，在正确使用简单句的同时，要努力使用复合句，提升作文档次。
点评：本文属于话题类作文，动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果。