题目内容
Many students fail to perform well in an exam not because they lack ability, but because of the unique pressure of the exam room—the tense atmosphere, the ticking clock on the wall, the teacher walking around, and the thought that their future will be decided by the exam.
It’s not just students who will face pressure. Human beings are competitive animals and we decide to evaluate each other, whether in exams, in job interviews or even on romantic dates, so all of us occasionally get nervous. Removing pressure from life is an impossible dream.
However, there are some ways which can help reduce our pressure. It turns out that we are far more likely to overcome the pressure when we are as familiar as possible with the situation we are about to face. Of course, even when we are well-prepared, we may still feel nervous, but at least we will be more equipped to deal with our nervousness than if we have failed to prepare. Furthermore, we may also benefit from reminding ourselves that the big moment is not that big after all from a different perspective. Even a huge exam is not as important as a loving family, or good health.
【写作内容】
1. 以约30个词概括这段短文的内容;
2. 然后以约120个词谈谈你对“压力”的看法, 内容包括:
(1)正确面对压力的重要性;
(2)作为高三的学生,你通常面临哪些压力?
(3)你在生活和学习中应对压力的措施。
【写作要求】
1、在作文中可以使用自己亲身的经历或虚构的故事,也可以参照阅读材料的内容,但不得直接引用原文中的句子;
2、作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。
【评分标准】
概括准确,语言规范,内容合适,篇章连贯。
One possible version:
The writer mainly tells us not only students but also other people would feel stressed on different occasions. Also, he gives some suggestions on how to reduce pressure.
As far as I ‘m concerned, pressure is part of life. It’s quite natural for us to feel stressed occasionally, at an exam, or when speaking to a stranger. So it’s of great importance to have a right attitude towards pressure. What we need to do is to relax ourselves and face the challenge positively and initiatively.
As Senior 3 students, we have to deal with some grown-up problems and make decisions by ourselves. Family can be one of the biggest causes of stress, such as problems with arguing with parents or brothers or sisters. We also have lots of stress from school, either from our classmates or teachers. However, the greatest pressure comes from study, which worries most of us as the National Matriculation Test is approaching. We also feel stressed about choosing our education after high school or not affording to go university.
In order to reduce pressure, first, a balanced diet and enough sleep are necessary; secondly, I would schedule my study properly so that I can have time to do sports or listen to music; also, friendship, support from my parents and encouragement from my teachers can help me a lot. I would try every means to relax myself and work with high efficiency to achieve my goal.
【解析】
试题分析:读写任务的要求是先用30个词来概括短文内容,然后再以约120个词谈谈对“压力”的看法,其中包括三方面内容:(1)正确面对压力的重要性;(2)作为高三的学生,通常面临哪些压力?( 3 )在生活和学习中应对压力的措施。根据本篇议论文的写作内容要求,在谋篇布局时文章可以分为四个部分,也就是分四个段落来分别讲述上述内容。在写作时除了使用高级词汇和短语来增加文章亮点外,还要使用多种句式结构,以提高文章档次。为了文章语义的连贯和上下文的衔接需要使用恰当的连接词,比如however,what’s more,in a word 等。
文章在讲述自己的经历时可以使用一般过去时,其他部分应使用一般现在时。
【亮点说明】本篇范文段落分明,层次清晰,过渡自然。在文章首段作者使用一个长句全面地概括了短文内容。然后在第二段阐述了面对压力应该有的正确态度;第三段以自己的例子为论据,证明态度的重要性;在末段从三个方面介绍应对压力的措施,而且使用first,secondly,also等词,把本段分为三个层次,给人以脉络清晰的感觉。在语言方面,长短句的结合,各种短语的使用也是文章的一个亮点,长句如However, the greatest pressure comes from study, which worries most of us as the National Matriculation Test is approaching.。短语有In order to,As far as I ‘m concerned,such as等。
考点:考查提纲作文
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注意:1.词数150左右;演讲的开头和结尾已写好,不记人总词数。
2.不要逐字逐条翻译,要组成一篇通顺连贯的短文。
浪费现象 | 危害 | 措施 |
1.水、电。 2.餐厅的食物。 3.其他(由考生自己添加) | 1.自身性格。 2.父母财政负担。 3.自然资源 | (内容由考生自己添加) |
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