题目内容
【写作内容】
你的笔友George 是英国某动物保护协会的成员,想了解2011年在上海举办的动物运动会的情况。请你根据下表,向他介绍该运动会的相关情况。
时间:2011年9月23日 地点:上海野生动物园 事件:2011年动物运动会拉开帷幕 具体报道:(1)30多种200余头世界各地的动物参加田径赛、球赛等项目 (2)观众席上座无虚席,运动会尤其受小朋友的欢迎 社会反响:一些动物保护组织表示抗议,认为此类运动会剥夺了动物的尊严,并对小朋友有不好的影响。 |
参考词汇:海野生动物园 the Shanghai Animal Park 动物运动会 Animal Games
田径赛 track and field 尊严 dignity
【写作要求】只能用5个句子表达全部内容;信件开头和结尾已给出,不计入总句数。
【评分标准】句子结构正确,信息内容完整,篇章连贯
Dear George,
I’m glad to have received your letter, in which you require some information about the Shanghai Animal Games. Here are some details about it.
This is all I know about the animal games. I hope this can be of some help to you.
Yours,
WuJie
One possible version:
Dear George,
I ‘m glad to received your letter , in whichi you require some information about the Shanghai Animal Games .Here are some details about it .The Animal Games opened its curtain in the Shanghai Animal Park on September 23,2022. Over 200 animals of more than 30 species from all over the world took part in track and field and ball games .It was so popular with children that there were no vacan/ empty seats during the games .However, it also met with oppositon from animal –protection organizations .They believed such kinds of games took dignity away from animals and would have a negative infuluence on children .This is all I know about the animal games .I hope this can be of some help to you .
Yours,
WuJie
【解析】
试题分析:本篇书面表达要求根据表格内容介绍2011年在上海举办的动物运动会的情况,内容包括时间,地点,事件,报道内容和社会反响。报道过去的事情,要使用一般过去时态和第一人称。因为是要求只能用5个句子表达全部内容,所以在写作时要尽量使用各种短语和包含信息量大的长句。比如定语从句,状语从句,同位语等等。而且要注意保证句子结构正确,要点信息全面。此外还要注意句子与句子之间的衔接,使内容流畅,通顺。可以使用的参考词汇:海野生动物园 the Shanghai Animal Park 动物运动会 Animal Games田径赛 track and field 尊严 dignity。
【亮点说明】本篇范文语言流畅自然,要点全面,用五个句子表达了所有要求内容,很好得完成了写作任务。在文中作者使用了多种句式结构,比如结果状语从句It was so popular with children that there were no vacan/ empty seats during the games,宾语从句They believed such kinds of games took dignity away from animals and would have a negative infuluence on children,表语从句This is all I know about the animal games .I hope this can be of some help to you 。而且作者使用了have a negative infuluence on,be of some help to,等高级词汇和短语,提高了作文档次。
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