题目内容
假设你是李华,曾在美国学习半年,现已回国。你想联系你的美国老师史密斯先生,但没有他的联系方式。请根据以下要点给你的美国同学汤姆写一封信:
(1)感谢汤姆对你英语学习的帮助;
(2)询问史密斯的近况并索要其联系方式;
(3)邀请汤姆在春节期间来中国感受中国文化。
注意:(1)词数100左右;
(2)可以适当增加细节。
Dear Tom,
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Yours faithfully,
Li Hua
Dear Tom,
Thank you very much for your help when I stayed in America. With your help, my English has improved a lot and my teachers and friends are surprised at my fluent English.
How is Mr. Smith? I want to know something about his life, so I tried to get in touch with him, but unluckily I do not have his address and can not connect with him. Do you have his email address or his telephone number?
The Spring Festival, which is like Christmas in the Western countries, is coming. It is an important traditional festival for Chinese, when all the family members get together. Would you like to come to feel the Chinese culture? I am sure you will live happily here and learn a lot of funny things. Besides, I can also show you around some places of interest.
Best wishes! I am looking forward to your early reply.
Yours faithfully,
Li Hua
【解析】
试题分析:书信类作文。要注重书信的格式,把题目中的要点写出来:感谢汤姆对你英语学习的帮助;询问史密斯的近况并索要其联系方式;邀请汤姆在春节期间来中国感受中国文化。尤其注意要把人称、时态表达清楚,因为本文涉及给斯密斯先生的转述以及感谢汤姆的帮助,邀请他来中国过春节。
【亮点说明】1、格式正确、层次清楚。作者掌握了英语书信类格式,也比较类似于中国的书信。第一段感谢汤姆的帮助、第二段询问斯密斯先生近况及联系方式、第三段发邀请及展望。条理清晰。2、词汇丰富、句型多样。如are surprised at;get in touch with him;show you around some places of interest. 尤其是The Spring Festival, which is like Christmas in the Western countries, is coming.运用了定语从句,使句子不落平庸,为文章增色不少。【提升空间】避免重复。Thank you very much for your help when I stayed in America. With your help,连着用两个help会使读者审美疲劳,后一个可用assistance代用。2、尽量多用委婉语以示尊重。Do you have his email address or his telephone number?这一句可以修改为would you please tell me his email address and his telephone number if u know that?英美人讲话比较绅士,多学习电影书本上英美人士的类似表达。
考点:书信类作文
Title | Time | Event |
Grandmother Student | today | An 83-year-old great grandmother received a bachelor’s degree(学士学位) from South-Eastern University today, more than 50 years after she took her first college course. |
Early Spring Storm | last night | An early spring heavy snow dumped 18 inches of snow on the city in less than six hours last night. |
Two Men Win Freedom | today | Two men picked up for disorderly conduct(不法行为) won their freedom today when they helped police officers save 20 persons from burning North Side apartment building. |
Henley Street Bridge Closed | On Friday | The Henley Street Bridge over the Tennessee will be closed at 8:00 on Friday, a State Highway official said today. |
Husband Kills Wife | today | Just 15 minutes after he shot and killed his unfriendly wife, a 22-year-old truck driver jumped to his death from the State Street Bridge. |
1.From the first piece of news we know that ______.
A. it took the old woman over 50 years to study at South-Eastern University.
B. the great grandmother was the oldest who received a bachelor’s degree.
C. the 83-year-old woman’s story surprised everyone.
D. the 83-year-old woman has a strong will.
2.The underlined word “dumped” means______.
A. fell B. left C. hit D. lasted
3.In the third piece of news, “picked up” means ______.
A. given a ride B. saved from danger
C. freed D. caught
4.Which of the following is right according to the last piece of news?
A. The wife was a 22-year-old truck driver.
B. The wife was shot after her husband died.
C. Shortly after having shot his wife, the young truck driver finished himself.
D. The wife died, but the husband didn’t.
5.Which is TRUE according to the news above?
A. A person who is about 70 years old can get a bachelor’s degree.
B. It never snows heavily at night in spring.
C. There were only 20 persons living in North Side apartment building.
D. Maybe today is Wednesday.
Tom 9-3-2006 4:38 pm. | I disagree with Jim. Andy sounds like every other singer. His voice is nothing special. On the other hand, Jacky’s voice is unique, and his songs are so romantic! |
Linda 9-10-2006 8:54 pm. | I think they’re about the same. But Andy is a better actor. I’ve seen almost all of his movies. Remember the one where he was an airplane pilot, and his plane crashed near a farm? I love that movie! |
John 9-16-2006 10:25 pm. | I also think Jacky is a better singer. I prefer his Cantonese songs. Maybe they sound better because Cantonese is his first language. |
Tom 10-2-2006 10:12 am. | I agree. Jacky’s Cantonese songs are better than his Mandarin songs. (Though, I still like all his songs!) |