题目内容
【题目】书面表达
下面四幅图片描述的是李明和爷爷从养鸟到放鸟的一段经历。请根据图片所提供的信息以第三人称用英语写一篇短文。
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注意:
1.短文必须包括所有图片的主要内容, 短文的内容要连贯、完整;
2.词数:100左右。
【答案】
One possible version:
One morning, Li Ming and his grandpa were feeding the bird in the cage. The bird was unhappy though it had enough food and water, Li Ming did not know why.
The next morning on his way to school Li Ming saw some birds flying in the sky. Then he thought of the lonely bird in the cage, He decided to persuade his grandpa to set the bird free. When he got home, he said to his grandpa, “Birds are friends!” To his delight, his grandpa agreed.
The bird was set free. Grandpa and the children were very happy to see the bird flying away into the sky.
【解析】
试题分析:本篇书面表达属于图表作文,根据图画写一个关于李明和爷爷从养鸟到放鸟的故事。写作时注意以下几点:1、仔细阅读有关提示,弄清试题提供的所有信息,明确要点就是主要内容。2、要认真读四幅图所给的信息。本文写作时可以按照2个方面(1.养鸟;2.放鸟。)的内容进行介绍。3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态;就本文而言应该用一般过去时说明情况。以第三人称为主。4.注意使用高级词汇和句式,以增加文章的亮点。
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑,层次分明,而且使用了多种句式和结构。比如see birds flying,though和When状语从句。还有短语think of, persuade his grandpa to set the bird free 和To his delight等。